Merge pull request #5684 from EnterpriseDB/docs/edits_to_migration_to…

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Edits to Migration Toolkit PR5658

product_docs/docs/migration_toolkit/55/09_mtk_errors.mdx

@@ -259,19 +259,18 @@ To correct the problem, specify `-fetchSize 1` as a command-line argument when y
 
 ### Incorrect timestamps and Daylight Saving Time
 
-When migrating from SQL Server to PostgreSQL using the MSSQL JDBC driver there may be no errors observed. If the source database contains rows with timestamp values which are within a range of time when Daylight Savings Time was in effect, they will be migrated to the target database with the wrong timestamps.
+When migrating from SQL Server to PostgreSQL using the MSSQL JDBC driver, an error in the migration of timestamps may occur that is not reported. Specifically, if the source database contains rows with timestamp values that are within a range of time when Daylight Savings Time was in effect, those rows will be migrated to the target database with the wrong timestamps.
 
-To resolve this issue you can update the `runMTK.sh` file and provide the option `-Duser.timezone=GMT`. This will be in operation then when running the toolkit,
+To resolve this issue, update the `runMTK.sh` file, and provide the option `-Duser.timezone=GMT`. This option will then be in effect when you run the toolkit.
 
-For example, given the original line:
+For example, suppose this is the original line:
 
 ```text
 runJREApplication $JAVA_HEAP_SIZE -Dprop=$base/etc/toolkit.properties -cp $base/bin/edb-migrationtoolkit.jar:$base/lib/* com.edb.MigrationToolkit "$@"
 ```
 
-This should be updated with the `-Duser.timezone=GMT` inserted before the `-cp` option:
+Update this line by inserting `-Duser.timezone=GMT` before the `-cp` option:
 
 ```text
 runJREApplication $JAVA_HEAP_SIZE -Dprop=$base/etc/toolkit.properties -Duser.timezone=GMT -cp $base/bin/edb-migrationtoolkit.jar:$base/lib/* com.edb.MigrationToolkit "$@"
 ```
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