timestamp error wording

Co-authored-by: Dj Walker-Morgan <[email protected]>

product_docs/docs/migration_toolkit/55/09_mtk_errors.mdx

@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ To correct the problem, specify `-fetchSize 1` as a command-line argument when y
 
 ### Incorrect timestamps and Daylight Saving Time
 
-When migrating from SQL Server to PostgreSQL using the MSSQL JDBC driver, the migration may error without reporting any errors. However, if the source database contains rows with timestamp values that are within a range of time when Daylight Savings Time was in effect, those rows will be migrated to the target database with the wrong timestamps.
+When migrating from SQL Server to PostgreSQL using the MSSQL JDBC driver, an error in the migration of timestamps may occur that is not reported. Specifically, if the source database contains rows with timestamp values that are within a range of time when Daylight Savings Time was in effect, those rows will be migrated to the target database with the wrong timestamps.
 
 To resolve this issue, update the `runMTK.sh` file, and provide the option `-Duser.timezone=GMT`. This option will then be in effect when you run the toolkit.