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diff --git a/...docs/postgres_distributed_for_kubernetes/1/identify_images/assemble_command.mdx b/...docs/postgres_distributed_for_kubernetes/1/identify_images/assemble_command.mdx
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 title: 'Assembling a deployment command'
 ---
 
-For a quick installation with the aim of testing the product, see the [Quick start](../quickstart/).
+For a quick installation with the aim of testing the product, see [Quick start](../quickstart/).
 
-For more targeted testing or production purposes, this overview describes how to assemble a command to deploy 
+For more targeted testing or production purposes, you can assemble a command to deploy 
 EDB Postgres Distributed for Kubernetes with the operand and proxy image versions of your choice. 
 
 ## Prerequisites 
@@ -39,8 +39,6 @@ After assembling the command with the required images,
 see [Installation](../installation_upgrade) for instructions on how to add the repository, 
 deploy the images, and create a certificate issuer. 
 
-For more information about how to assemble your command, see the examples: 
-
 ### Examples 
 
 These example commands: 
@@ -66,7 +64,7 @@ Set the environment variables for the deployment command:
     export EDB_SUBSCRIPTION_TOKEN=<my_registry_token>
     ```
 
-1.  Set the environment variable to use EBD Postgres Advanced Server 15.6.2 as the Postgres option, 
+1.  Set the environment variable to use EBD Postgres Advanced Server 15.6.2 as the Postgres option 
     and PGD 5.4.1 as the Postgres Distributed version: 
 
     ```
@@ -104,7 +102,7 @@ Set the environment variables for the deployment command:
     export EDB_SUBSCRIPTION_TOKEN=<my_registry_token>
     ```
 
-1.  Insert the repository, image and proxy names into the command:
+1.  Insert the repository, image, and proxy names into the command:
 
     ```
     helm upgrade --dependency-update \

diff --git a/...s/postgres_distributed_for_kubernetes/1/identify_images/identify_image_name.mdx b/...s/postgres_distributed_for_kubernetes/1/identify_images/identify_image_name.mdx
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 title: 'Identifying image names'
 ---
 
-For a quick installation with the aim of testing the product, see the [Quick start](../quickstart/).
+For a quick installation with the aim of testing the product, see [Quick start](../quickstart/).
 For more targeted testing or production purposes, 
-this overview describes how to select a specific operand and proxy image version that's appropriate for your Postgres distribution.
+you can select a specific operand and proxy image version that's appropriate for your Postgres distribution.
 
 ## Operand image name 
 

diff --git a/product_docs/docs/postgres_distributed_for_kubernetes/1/identify_images/index.mdx b/product_docs/docs/postgres_distributed_for_kubernetes/1/identify_images/index.mdx
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ navigation:
   - assemble_command
 ---
 
-If you plan on deploying a specific version of Postgres Distributed or a specific Postgres distribution or version, you will need to select the appropriate images and image versions.
+If you plan on deploying a specific version of Postgres Distributed or a specific Postgres distribution or version, you need to select the appropriate images and image versions.
 Before [installing EDB Postgres Distributed for Kubernetes](../installation_upgrade):
 
 1.  Identify your repository name and retrieve your user token as explained in [EDB private image registries](private_registries).