Merge pull request #5719 from EnterpriseDB/docs/edits_to_patroni_pr5656

Edits to Patroni PR5656
EnterpriseDB · Jun 3, 2024 · 8812ace · 8812ace
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diff --git a/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/patroni/installing_patroni.mdx b/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/patroni/installing_patroni.mdx
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   - Patroni
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-EDB provides Patroni to customers via the `edb-patroni` package. This package provides Patroni itself and all its dependencies, so there is no need to install additional packages on the Postgres nodes.
+EDB provides Patroni to customers by way of the `edb-patroni` package. This package provides Patroni and all its dependencies, so you don't need to install additional packages on the Postgres nodes.
 
-As the dependencies no longer have to be installed separately, there is no need to install the python3-cdiff, python3-psutil, python3-psycopg2, python3-ydiff, python3-click, python3-click, python3-six, python3-dateutil, python3-prettytable, python3-pyyaml, python3-urllib3, python3-etcd, python3-dns or python3-certifi packages.
+Since the dependencies don't have to be installed separately, you don't need to install the python3-cdiff, python3-psutil, python3-psycopg2, python3-ydiff, python3-click, python3-click, python3-six, python3-dateutil, python3-prettytable, python3-pyyaml, python3-urllib3, python3-etcd, python3-dns, or python3-certifi packages.
 
 Packages are available for all subscribed customers with a valid EDB account under any entitlement (Community360, Standard, and Enterprise).
 
 !!! Note
-    The `edb-patroni` does not provide packages for the etcd server needed for the DCS cluster
+    The `edb-patroni` package doesn't provide packages for the etcd server needed for the DCS cluster.
 
-Once you have the EDB repository configured on all the nodes of the cluster, run the following commands depending on the Linux distribution you are using.
+Once you have the EDB repository configured on all the nodes of the cluster, run the following commands based on the Linux distribution you're using.
 
 ### Debian/Ubuntu
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ sudo apt-get install -y edb-patroni
 ```
 
 !!! Note
-    On Debian and Ubuntu installations, if you've previously installed the Patroni package named `patroni` using the EDB repositories, `apt upgrade` will not replace this package with the `edb-patroni` package. Executing `apt install edb-patroni` will install `edb-patroni` as a replacement of `patroni`.
+    On Debian and Ubuntu installations, if you previously installed the Patroni package named `patroni` using the EDB repositories, `apt upgrade` will not replace this package with the `edb-patroni` package. Executing `apt install edb-patroni` will install `edb-patroni` as a replacement of `patroni`.
 
 See [Quick start on Debian 11](debian11_quick_start/#4-patroni) for a more detailed configuration example.
 
@@ -39,5 +39,4 @@ See [Quick start on RHEL8](rhel8_quick_start/#4-patroni) for a more detailed con
 
 ### Installing community packages
 
-We also support community packages provided through PGDG repositories. Follow the [PGDG deb download instructions](https://www.postgresql.org/download/linux/debian/) to set up the `apt` repository, or the [PGDG rpm download instructions](https://yum.postgresql.org/) for the `yum` repository. Keep in mind that for PGDG rpm repositories you will need to configure Extra Packages for Enterprise Linux ([EPEL](https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EPEL)).
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+We also support community packages provided through PGDG repositories. Follow the [PGDG deb download instructions](https://www.postgresql.org/download/linux/debian/) to set up the `apt` repository or the [PGDG rpm download instructions](https://yum.postgresql.org/) for the `yum` repository. Keep in mind that you need to configure Extra Packages for Enterprise Linux ([EPEL](https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EPEL)) for PGDG rpm repositories.
diff --git a/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/patroni/installing_with_TPA.mdx b/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/patroni/installing_with_TPA.mdx
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 ### Deploying a Patroni cluster with TPA
 
-The recommended way for deploying Patroni clusters is by doing so with TPA. We recommend going over the [TPA documentation](https://www.enterprisedb.com/docs/tpa/latest/) for further information on deploying M1 architectures with Patroni as the failover manager.
+We recommend deploying Patroni clusters using TPA. See the [TPA documentation](https://www.enterprisedb.com/docs/tpa/latest/) for more information on deploying M1 architectures with Patroni as the failover manager.
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		### Deploying a Patroni cluster with TPA

		The recommended way for deploying Patroni clusters is by doing so with TPA. We recommend going over the [TPA documentation](https://www.enterprisedb.com/docs/tpa/latest/) for further information on deploying M1 architectures with Patroni as the failover manager.
		We recommend deploying Patroni clusters using TPA. See the [TPA documentation](https://www.enterprisedb.com/docs/tpa/latest/) for more information on deploying M1 architectures with Patroni as the failover manager.