Merge pull request #4906 from EnterpriseDB/docs/edits_to_epas25_pt4873

Edits to note
EnterpriseDB · Oct 17, 2023 · 195438c · 195438c
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diff --git a/...as/15/upgrading/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx b/...as/15/upgrading/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx
@@ -30,22 +30,22 @@ For more information about using `yum` commands and options, enter `yum --help`
 
 !!! Important
 
-If upgrading to version 15.4,  or later, you should run `edb_sqlpatch`
+If upgrading to version 15.4  or later, run `edb_sqlpatch`.
 
-If the command responds that it has a number of patches needing to be applied like so:
+The command might respond that it has a number of patches needing to be applied, for example:
 
 ```console
 * database edb
 0 patches were previously applied to this database.
 58 patches need to be applied to this database.
 ```
 
-Then it will be necessary to execute edb_sqlpatch to patch the system catalog. Run:
+In this case, you need to run edb_sqlpatch to patch the system catalog:
 
 ```shell
 edb_sqlpatch -af
 ```
 
 !!!
 
-For more information about using `edb_sqlpatch` commands and options, please see [edb_sqlpatch](/tools/edb_sqlpatch/) page.
+For more information about using edb_sqlpatch commands and options, see [edb_sqlpatch](/tools/edb_sqlpatch/).