Merge pull request #4907 from EnterpriseDB/docs/edits_to_ebplus_nonge…

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edited non-generated install pages

product_docs/docs/edb_plus/41/installing/configuring_linux_installation.mdx

@@ -5,9 +5,11 @@ redirects:
  - /edb_plus/latest/03_installing_edb_plus/install_on_linux/configuring_linux_installation/
 ---
 
-By default, the `pg_hba.conf` file for the RPM installer enforces `IDENT` authentication. Before invoking EDB\*Plus, you must either modify the `pg_hba.conf` file, changing the authentication method to a form other than `IDENT` (and restarting the server), or perform the following steps to ensure that an `IDENT` server is accessible:
+By default, the `pg_hba.conf` file for the RPM installer enforces `IDENT` authentication. Before invoking EDB\*Plus, you must either: 
+- Modify the `pg_hba.conf` file, changing the authentication method to a form other than `IDENT` (and restarting the server.
+- Ensure that an `IDENT` server is accessible. 
 
-You must confirm that an `identd` server is installed and running. You can use the `yum` package manager to install an `identd` server by invoking the command:
+To ensure an `IDENT` server is accessible, you must confirm that an `identd` server is installed and running. You can use the `yum` package manager to install an `identd` server.
 
 -   On RHEL or CentOS 7:
 
@@ -21,7 +23,7 @@ You must confirm that an `identd` server is installed and running. You can use t
     dnf -y install xinetd authd
     ```
 
-The command should create a file named `/etc/xinetd.d/auth` that contains:
+The command creates a file named `/etc/xinetd.d/auth` that contains:
 
 ```text
 service auth
@@ -37,9 +39,9 @@ server = /usr/sbin/in.authd server_args = -t60 --xerror –os
 ```
 
 !!! Note
-    If the file includes a `-E` argument at the end of the server arguments, please erase `-E`.
+    If the file includes a `-E` argument at the end of the server arguments, delete `-E`.
 
-Then, to start the `identd` server, invoke the following commands:
+To start the `identd` server:
 
 ```text
 systemctl enable xinetd
@@ -55,18 +57,18 @@ Open the `pg_ident.conf` file and create a user mapping:
 
 Where:
 
--   The name specified in the `map_name` column is a user-defined name that will identify the mapping in the `pg_hba.conf` file.
+-   The name specified in the `map_name` column is a name you define to identify the mapping in the `pg_hba.conf` file.
 -   The name specified in the `system_username` column is `enterprisedb`.
 -   The name specified in the `postgres_username` column is `enterprisedb`.
 
 Then, open the `pg_hba.conf` file and modify the `IDENT` entries:
 
--   If you are using an IPv4 local connection, modify the file entry to read:
+-   If you're using an IPv4 local connection, modify the file entry to read:
 
      `host all all 127.0.0.0/0 ident map=edbas`
 
--   If you are using an IPv6 local connection, modify the file entry to read:
+-   If you're using an IPv6 local connection, modify the file entry to read:
 
      `host all all ::1/128 ident map=edbas`
 
-You must restart the Advanced Server service before invoking EDB\*Plus. For detailed information about controlling the Advanced Server service, see the online documentation for [EDB Postgres Advanced Server](/epas/latest/).
+You must restart the EDB Postgres Advanced Server service before invoking EDB\*Plus. For detailed information about EDB Postgres Advanced Server, see the [EDB Postgres Advanced Server](/epas/latest/) documentation.

product_docs/docs/edb_plus/41/installing/windows.mdx

@@ -10,30 +10,28 @@ EDB provides a graphical interactive installer for Windows. You access it using
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-Before installing EDB\*Plus, you must first install Java (version 1.8 or later). For Windows, Java installers and instructions are available online at:
-
- <http://www.java.com/en/download/manual.jsp>
+Before installing EDB\*Plus, you must first install Java version 1.8 or later. For Windows, Java installers and instructions are available at the [Java download page](http://www.java.com/en/download/manual.jsp).
 
 ## Using StackBuilder Plus
 
-After installing EDB Postgres Advanced Server, you can use StackBuilder Plus to invoke the graphical installer for EDB*Plus. See [Using StackBuilder Plus](/epas/latest/epas_inst_windows/installing_advanced_server_with_the_interactive_installer/using_stackbuilder_plus/). 
+After installing EDB Postgres Advanced Server, you can use StackBuilder Plus to invoke the graphical installer for EDB\*Plus. See [Using StackBuilder Plus](/epas/latest/epas_inst_windows/installing_advanced_server_with_the_interactive_installer/using_stackbuilder_plus/). 
 
-1. Using the Windows start menu, open StackBuilder Plus and follow the prompts until you get to the module selection page. 
+1. Using the Windows Start menu, open StackBuilder Plus. Follow the prompts until you get to the module selection page. 
 
-1. Expand the **Add-ons, tools, and utilities** node and select **EDB*Plus**. 
+1. Expand the **Add-ons, tools, and utilities** node and select **EDB\*Plus**. 
 
-1. Select **Next** and proceed to the [Using the graphical installer](#using-the-graphical-installer) section in this topic.
+1. Select **Next**, which brings you to the graphical installer.
 
 ## Using the graphical installer 
 
 1. Select the installation language and select **OK**.
 
-1. On the Setup EDB*Plus page, select **Next**.
+1. On the Setup EDB\*Plus page, select **Next**.
 
-1. Browse to a directory where you want EDB*Plus to be installed, or allow the installer to install it in the default location. Select **Next**.
+1. Browse to a directory where you want to install EDB\*Plus, or leave the default location. Select **Next**.
 
 1. On the Ready to Install page, select **Next**.
 
-   An information box shows installation progress. This may take a few minutes.
+   An information box shows installation progress. Installation might take a few minutes.
 
 1. When the installation has completed, select **Finish**.