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Zhenzhen Wang committed May 13, 2020
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<h4>Peer Feedback</h4>
<b>Feedback from peers</b>
<b>Feedback from Peers</b>
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<li>The basemap of World is centered and is a reasonable size. The thickness of country wise
<li><i>The basemap of World is centered and is a reasonable size. The thickness of country wise
boundary is good.
The size of the symbols is a little big and they overlap too much. I would suggest to use a
bubble to show the intensity of incidents per country.</li>
<li>Details given about the coronavirus cases are helpful to understand . But the cases given are
only per country rather than per location.</li>
<li>Only one color is used to show the coronavirus cases.</li>
<li>There's a good amount of data on the map but compared to the size of the svg, I wouldn't say
that the data density is very high. The water of the map takes up half of the space.</li>
bubble to show the intensity of incidents per country.</i></li>
<li><i>Details given about the coronavirus cases are helpful to understand . But the cases given are
only per country rather than per location.</i></li>
<li><i>Only one color is used to show the coronavirus cases.</i></li>
<li><i>There's a good amount of data on the map but compared to the size of the svg, I wouldn't say
that the data density is very high. The water of the map takes up half of the space.</i></li>
</ul>

<b>Feedback from insturctor</b>
<b>Feedback from Instructor</b>
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<li>Maybe make map size smaller since the interactivity is main part that will showing my topic</li>
<li><i>Maybe make map size smaller since the interactivity is main part that will showing my topic</i></li>
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<b>Changes that I have made in response to feedback</b><
<b>Changes that I have made in response to feedback</b>
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<li>Made the text more legible</li>
<li>Added more interactivity and richer data by allowing different dates to be selected</li>
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but I want to incorporate the best features from each and add some of my own to tell the most
accurate story possible.
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<h4>My Questions</h4>
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<li><b>Are we winning the war against COVID-19?</b></li>
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<p>I want to show the situation on a world map so that anyone can get an intuition for where we
stand.</p>

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<h4>Answers that I Want to Explore</h4>
<p>As of April 2020, the total number COVID-19 cases worldwide is still increasing very fast. In
some of the worst-hit places the number of daily infections has peaked, while other countries
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