Article "Firewall"

[fabiandudler]

Added article on "Firewall"

[Ajorian]

I personally like the metaphor you used to talk about firewalls. But, from my perspective, this works only for the case of stateless firewalls. I think it would be better if you talk also a little bit about state-full firewalls.

[evos96]

External feedback:

negative aspect(s) pointed out:
-It was not clear. (2)
-The article was too technical. (2)
-The structure was confusing (1)
-I didn't understand the purpose. (3)

positive aspect(s) pointed out:
-The information was easy to understand. (6)
-Good balance between technical depth and readability.(2)
-I stayed engaged throughout.(2)
-I understood the purpose (3)

Did the drawing help you to understand the meaning of the article?
yes (9)
no (4)

Did you notice any factual errors or inaccuracies in the article? If Yes, which part?
-It was too clear

Additional comments?
-Nice
-You mention burning wall and in the graphic there is a robot - match the graphic to the text better.

[carinaschrenk]

Internal Feedback Round 1B 14.11

Thoughts

• The illustration is not related to the topic.
• The concept Firewall is not linked to the title; the last paragraph explains what the firewall is, but it doesn’t relate to the rest of the text.

Ideas

• The article could benefit from an explanation of stateful, it only mentions stateless.