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-I am a product owner with over {{% yearssince 2011 %}} years of experience in web and mobile development, working with agile methods.
+I am a product owner with over {{% yearssince 2011 %}} years of experience in developing web and mobile products, working with agile methods.
 
-I have led development teams of more than 20 members and specialize in evaluating product-market fits in real-world scenarios. My strength lies in making complex technologies user-friendly.
+I have led teams of more than 20 members and specialize in evaluating product-market fit in real-world scenarios. My strength lies in making complex technologies user-friendly.
 
-I have worked on a variety of projects, including optimizing conversions for e-commerce, increasing user engagement in social networks, and finding the right market fit for new or established products or . Throughout my career, I have managed several major product launches and developed numerous complex products. My focus is on delivering fast, practical results.
+I have worked on a variety of projects, including optimizing conversions for e-commerce, increasing user engagement in social networks, and finding the right market fit for new or established products. Throughout my career, I have managed several major product launches and developed numerous complex products. My focus is on delivering fast, practical results.