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 Hi there!
 
-I am Rey, a Research Specialist Lead at the [University of Missouri-Columbia](https://missouri.edu){:target="_blank"}. I
-am part of the [Personality and Emotion Laboratory](https://sites.google.com/view/personalityandemotionlab/){:target="_
-blank"}, working with [Professor Timothy Trull](https://psychology.missouri.edu/people/trull){:target="_blank"}, and
-the [Distributed and Intelligent Computing Laboratory](https://dslsrv1.rnet.missouri.edu){:target="_blank"}, working
-with [Professor Yi Shang](https://engineering.missouri.edu/faculty/yi-shang/){:target="_blank"}. My research interests
-include utilizing [Large Language Models (LLMs)](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Large_language_model){:target="_blank"}
-for data analysis of [digital phenotyping](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_phenotyping){:target="_blank"}
+I am Rey, a Research Specialist Lead at the [University of Missouri-Columbia](https://missouri.edu){:target="_blank"}.
+I work in the [Personality and Emotion Laboratory](https://sites.google.com/view/personalityandemotionlab/){:target="_
+blank"} with [Professor Timothy Trull](https://psychology.missouri.edu/people/trull){:target="_blank"} and
+the [Distributed and Intelligent Computing Laboratory](https://dslsrv1.rnet.missouri.edu){:target="_blank"} with
+[Professor Yi Shang](https://engineering.missouri.edu/faculty/yi-shang/){:target="_blank"}. My research focuses on
+utilizing [Large Language Models (LLMs)](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Large_language_model){:target="_blank"} for
+analyzing [digital phenotyping](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_phenotyping){:target="_blank"}
 and [passive sensing](https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6729117/){:target="_blank"} data to
 understand [high-intensity drinking](https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6104968/){:target="_blank"} problems.
 
-I have over five years of industry
-experience, having served as a Software Engineer and in leadership roles across startups, banking, and manufacturing
-sectors. Additionally, I hold a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science
+I have over five years of industry experience, having served as a Software Engineer and held leadership roles across
+startups, banking, and manufacturing sectors. Additionally, I hold a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science
 from [Satya Wacana Christian University](https://fti.uksw.edu){:target="_blank"} and a Master's degree in Computer
 Science from the [University of Missouri-Columbia](https://engineering.missouri.edu){:target="_blank"}.