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 This approach not only bolsters security but also simplifies the migration process, making it faster and more reliable, crucial benefits for teams managing large-scale data transfers or frequent workload migrations across diverse environments.
 
-To demonstrate how to set up and use NetBird for secure and efficient database workload migration, we'll:
+To demonstrate how to use NetBird for securely migrating workloads to the cloud while maintaining access to on-premise databases, we'll walk through the following process:
 
-* Set up a local PostgreSQL database with a sample table and a Python-based workload, simulating an on-premise environment.
-* Migrate the Python workload to a cloud instance.
-* Establish a secure connection using NetBird.
-* Verify the migrated workload's access to the on-premise database.
+* Set up a local PostgreSQL database with a sample table, simulating an on-premise data resource.
+* Create a Python-based workload that interacts with this database, representing an on-premise application.
+* Migrate the Python workload to a cloud instance, while keeping the database on-premise.
+* Establish a secure connection between the cloud workload and on-premise database using NetBird.
+* Verify that the migrated cloud workload can securely access and interact with the on-premise database.
 
-This process illustrates a practical scenario of migrating workloads to the cloud while maintaining secure access to on-premise data resources.
+This practical scenario illustrates how NetBird enables organizations to use cloud resources for workloads while maintaining secure access to sensitive on-premise data, facilitating a hybrid cloud approach to database workload migration.
 
 ## Prerequisites