Update hero-banner.md #6453
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| @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Here are some cool activities to get you started! | |||
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| * name: Build a Bubble Popping Game | |||
| * buttonLabel: Code Now | |||
| * description: Create your own bubble popping game with the crew from Disney & Pixar's Inside Out 2! | |||
| * description: Code with images from Disney & Pixar's Inside Out 2! | |||
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I'm okay with this, but I'll note that it does sound a little like we're using the images to write actual code (as opposed to blocks)
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I agree.. I like the little crew sentiment in there, I think that's cute. Could it be changed to something like Code with the crew (maybe emotions here?) from Disney and Pixar's Inside Out 2? It's a bit of a nod to the first pop-up, too, since the pop-up says "are you ready to try something new with Joy and the rest of the emotions..."
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Yeah, I tried to figure out how to leave it in, but I think it's still too long. Since the banner already has the Disney/Pixar stuff in it, we could probably just say "Code a game featuring some of our favorite characters." Because, technically, I need to get everything approved by Disney/Pixar if we use their brand.
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Maybe "Code a game featuring characters from the new movie!"
Modifying to text that doesn't need Disney/Pixar approval.
* Update hero-banner.md Shortening the description text * Update hero-banner.md Modifying to text that doesn't need Disney/Pixar approval.
* Update hero-banner.md (#6453) * Update hero-banner.md Shortening the description text * Update hero-banner.md Modifying to text that doesn't need Disney/Pixar approval. * Updating Educator Page (#6454) --------- Co-authored-by: Kiki Prottsman <[email protected]>
Shortening the description text so it doesn't try to scroll anymore.