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 I've been using a [wireless][nice-nano] [Ferris Sweep][ferris-sweep] from
 [Boardsource][boardsource] with [Nocturnal keyswitches][nocturnal] since Spring
-2024. I love it!
+2024. (I didn't mean to fall down this rabbit hole, but what a delightful trip
+it's been!)
 
-This repository holds its firmware configuration. I had initially
-[tweaked][tweaked] the thoughtful [Miryoku][miryoku] layout and used that quite
-happily. Now I am inlining it all here so it'll be easier for me to tinker
-with.
+This repository holds its firmware configuration.
+
+I didn't start here, though; I first [tweaked][tweaked] the thoughtful
+[Miryoku][miryoku] layout and used that quite happily for some time. Now that I
+understand it all a little better, I'm dropping down to this level so that I
+can tinker a little more freely.
 
 ## Changes from Miryoku
 
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 - Added a [Sturdy][sturdy] layer so I can play around with it! I may add other
   experimental layouts like this from time to time.
 
-## TODO, Maybe
+## Things I might try someday
 
 - Add a QWERTY layer so I can let friends test-drive the keyboard more easily.
 - Explore non-momentary layer switching, since my thumbs get a little fatigued
   holding layer switches down.
 
-## Layers
+## What the layers look like
 
 ![keymap][keymap]