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high level serverless doc consolidation and refactoring #191
high level serverless doc consolidation and refactoring #191
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cc: @KOTungseth started refactor |
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First round of suggestions to make the narrative clearer
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You can add multiple members by entering their email addresses separated by a space or pressing Enter. | ||
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You can grant access to all projects of the same type with a unique role, or select individual roles for specific projects. |
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Not sure I understand the mappings from roles to projects in this sentence.
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[[general-assign-user-roles-instance-access-roles]] | ||
=== Instance access roles |
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What does instance access mean?
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"Instance access" is the term used in the Roles UI to refer to "hosted deployment or serverless project".
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gave additional upfront guidance to clear up the confusion.
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Sorry for the noise, I didn't realize the visualize library page had been reintroduced, so reverted my commits :) |
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Co-authored-by: Kaarina Tungseth <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Kaarina Tungseth <[email protected]>
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Few small fixes in the latest edits
Co-authored-by: florent-leborgne <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: florent-leborgne <[email protected]>
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LGTM! 🚀
I read through it and all looks good.
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Nice! This makes the structure a lot more natural to navigate
Will merge once redirects in https://github.com/elastic/website-development/issues/14461 are live. |
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LGTM! 🚀
Just a quick drive-by but I reviewed more carefully earlier.
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