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    "source": [
     "# DataJoint Elements for Array Electrophysiology with NeuroPixels\n",
     "\n",
-    "#### Open-source Data Pipeline for Processing and Analyzing Extracellular Electrophysiology Datasets\n",
+    "#### Open-source data pipeline for processing and analyzing extracellular electrophysiology datasets.\n",
     "\n",
     "Welcome to the tutorial for the DataJoint Element for extracellular array electrophysiology. This\n",
     "tutorial aims to provide a comprehensive understanding of the open-source data pipeline\n",
     "created using `element-array-ephys`.\n",
     "\n",
-    "This package is designed to seamlessly process and ingest extracellular electrophysiology\n",
+    "This package is designed to seamlessly process, ingest, and track extracellular electrophysiology\n",
     "data, along with its associated probe and recording metadata. By the end of this\n",
     "tutorial you will have a clear grasp on setting up and integrating `element-array-ephys`\n",
     "into your specific research projects and lab. \n",
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     "and manage sessions of array electrophysiology data, including spike sorting results and\n",
     "unit-level visualizations. \n",
     "\n",
-    "The results of this Element example can be combined with **other modalities** to create\n",
-    "a complete customizable data pipeline for your specific lab or study. For instance, you\n",
+    "The results of this Element can be combined with **other modalities** to create\n",
+    "a complete, customizable data pipeline for your specific lab or study. For instance, you\n",
     "can combine `element-array-ephys` with `element-calcium-imaging` and\n",
     "`element-deeplabcut` to characterize the neural activity along with markless\n",
     "pose-estimation during behavior.\n",
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-    "If the tutorial is run in Codespaces, there is a local database private to you for\n",
-    "experimentation. Let's connect to the database server."
+    "If the tutorial is run in Codespaces, a private, local database server is created and\n",
+    "made available for you. This is where we will insert and store our processed results.\n",
+    "Let's connect to the database server."
    ]
   },
   {
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     "As evident from the diagram, this data pipeline encompasses tables associated with\n",
     "recording and probe metadata, results of clustering, and optional curation of clustering\n",
     "results. A few tables, such as `subject.Subject` or `session.Session`,\n",
-    "while important for a complete pipeline, fall outside the scope of `element-array-ephys`\n",
+    "while important for a complete pipeline, fall outside the scope of the `element-array-ephys`\n",
     "tutorial, and will therefore, not be explored extensively here. The primary focus of\n",
     "this tutorial will be on the `probe` and `ephys` schemas.\n",
     "\n",