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@@ -111,7 +111,6 @@ To support &rmt; deployment, it is recommended to deploy a &rmt; instance from a
     <listitem>
       <para>
         A static IP address or a DNS name is required in order for clients to connect to the &rmt; server.
-In Azure,AWS and GCP, a
         In Azure, AWS and GCP, a Cloud Service Provider(CSP) provided DNS is assigned when the instance is launched.
         This IP or DNS may change if the instance is recreated. For Azure, consider using a static IP address to provide a consistent
         connection point for your clients. In AWS, this would be an elastic IP or Route53. In GCP, this would be a cloud DNS
@@ -135,7 +134,7 @@ Cloud NAT services. Azure offers similar services.
     <listitem>
       <para>
       Clients can connect to &rmt; on ports 80 and 443.
-      When launching the &sles; instance to support &rmt; check in AWS the network security group is configured to allow
+      When launching the &sles; instance to support &rmt; check if in AWS the network security group is configured to allow
       inbound access to the &rmt; server from your clients (HTTP/HTTPS). For GCP, the firewall rules must be configured to allow
       inbound access to the &rmt; server from your clients.
 When a &sles; instance is launched to support &rmt;, it is possible to use an existing AWS security group or a new one.
@@ -146,7 +145,26 @@ The security group must be configured to allow inbound access to the &rmt; serve
 </sect1>
 <sect1>
   <title>More information</title>
-  <para></para>
+  <variablelist>
+     <varlistentry>
+     <term><link xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sles/15-SP6/html/SLES-all/cha-rmt-mirroring.html#sec-rmt-mirroring-credentials"/>
+     </term>
+     <listitem>
+      <para>
+      Organization credentials to create a local mirror of the &sle; repositories.
+      </para>
+     </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+    <varlistentry>
+     <term><link xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sles/15-SP6/html/SLES-all/cha-register-sle.html#sec-register-sle-installation"/>
+     </term>
+     <listitem>
+      <para>
+       Register and activate &sles; with the SUSE Customer Center.
+      </para>
+     </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
 </sect1>
 
 </chapter>