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music/latex/music-proceedings-template.tex

@@ -7,8 +7,6 @@
 
 \documentclass{nimemusic}
 
-
-\usepackage{lipsum} %used to generate default text
 % Rights management information.
 \setcopyright{cc4}
 \nimeYear{2024}
@@ -21,56 +19,39 @@
 
 \title{Title: Your NIME Music Performance}
 
-
-
-% The "author" command and its associated commands are used to define
-% the authors and their affiliations.
-% Of note is the shared affiliation of the first two authors, and the
-% "authornote" and "authornotemark" commands
-% used to denote shared contribution to the research.
+% Author information, leave this blank for the initial submission.
 \author{Author One}
 \affiliation{%
-  \institution{Affilitation \#1}
+  \institution{Affilitation}
   \city{City}
   \country{Country}
 }
 
 \author{Author Two}
 \affiliation{%
-  \institution{Affilitation \#1}
+  \institution{Another Affilitation}
   \city{City}
   \country{Country}
 }
 
 \author{Author Three}
 \affiliation{%
-  \institution{Affilitation \#1}
+  \institution{More Affilitations}
   \city{City}
   \country{Country}
 }
 
-
-% By default, the full list of authors will be used in the page
-% headers. Often, this list is too long, and will overlap
-% other information printed in the page headers. This command allows
-% the author to define a more concise list
-% of authors' names for this purpose.
+% Uncomment this command to define a custom short list of authors.
 % \renewcommand{\shortauthors}{One, Two and Three}
 
+% Keywords: use these to describe your work.
+\keywords{typical, keywords, fix, these, before, submission}
 
-% Keywords. The author(s) should pick words that accurately describe
-% the work being presented. Separate the keywords with commas.
-\keywords{datasets, neural networks, gaze detection, text tagging}
-
-
-% This command processes the author and affiliation and title
-% information and builds the first part of the formatted document.
 \maketitle
 
-
 \section{Program Notes}
 
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 Plus, some citations to articles: \cite{doe2023,
 wizard2022, alien2024}.
@@ -80,23 +61,27 @@ \section{Program Notes}
   \caption{The NIME Mouse}
 \end{figure}
 
-
 \section{Project Description}
 
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+
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 \section{Technical Notes}
 
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 \section{Media Links}
 
+In this section, please provide a list of links to media representations of your submission.
+
 \begin{itemize}
-	\item Video: \url{www.yournimevideolink.com/younameit}
-	\item Audio: \url{www.yournimeaudiolink.com/younameit}
+	\item Video: \url{https://www.yournimevideolink.com/younameit}
+	\item Audio: \url{https://www.yournimeaudiolink.com/younameit}
 \end{itemize}
 
-
 % The acknowledgements section is optional and can be removed if not needed.
 \begin{acks}
 The authors would like to thank\ldots
@@ -106,7 +91,7 @@ \section{Media Links}
 
 \section*{Ethical Standards}
 
-Please note that an Ethical Standards section is required for NIME submissions.
+Please note that an Ethical Standards section is required for all NIME submissions.
 
 This could include information regarding sources of funding, sustainability factors, potential conflicts of interest,  informed consent if the research involved human participants, statement on welfare of animals if the research involved animals, or other ethical factors that are relevant to the work.