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 to increase benefits from [biodiversity projects](../../data-pipeline/research/) aimed at [eliminating government debt](../start/charts/).</span>
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-## What makes our UX Unique and Exciting
+## What makes our UX unique and exciting
 
 The model.earth interface makes [selecting locations](#geoview=country) and [topics](#appview=topics) quick-and-easy for viewing local industries and census attributes. Our maps, tables and charts load faster than most websites thanks to our use of static files and Tabulator&nbsp;grids.
 
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 Instead of showing the census grid on the initial load, we'll provide a small snapshot about the location with interesting census attributes. We'll link the snapshot to CensusReporter.com for their great chart details (NY zip 10001).
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-We're focused on providing a tight layout using census highlights, combined with All the Places location summaries, environmental [footprint labels](/io/template/) for products, individuals and communities, along with [timelines](/data-pipeline/timelines/) for job level projections and industry input-output details using the US EPA's [extended industry data](../../io/charts/).
+We're focused on providing a tight layout using census highlights, combined with All the Places location summaries, along with environmental [footprint labels](/io/template/) for products, individuals and communities, and [timelines](/data-pipeline/timelines/) for job level projections and industry input-output details using the US EPA's [extended industry data](../../io/charts/).
 
 [Community Data](/community-data) and [Code Meetups](/io/coders)

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       <b>Objectives</b><br>
       Reduce and eliminate government expenses through transparancy and open collaboration.<br>
-      Identify products and choices that minimze environmental impacts around <a href="/data-commons/">30-year UN Goals</a>.<br>
-      Foster opportunities for price discrimination that create inclusion and reduce barriers.<br>
+      Identify products and choices that minimze environmental impacts around <a href="/data-commons/">UN 30-year goal timelines</a>.<br>
+      Foster opportunities for differential pricing that create inclusion, accountability and reduced barriers.<br>
 
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