MicrosoftDocs · Saisang · Oct 11, 2023 · Nov 22, 2023
diff --git a/rd/allen-oneill.yml b/rd/allen-oneill.yml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ remarks: |
   Allen is CTO for ‘The DataWorks’, delivering AI-driven web-data solutions to top tier organisations worldwide. His core focus is designing innovative technology solutions at scale, and his primary background is in enterprise systems. He has deep cross platform and vendor expertise using Azure, AWS, Google, AliBaba and on-premises cloud platforms. Allen is one of the few that can successfully bridge the gap between tech and business while remaining deeply technical and capable of leading at all levels. He is adept at balancing the needs of the organisation with the realities of what can be achieved using technology within defined constraints. As a consultant he has worked internationally with organisations of all sizes and has a proven record of being able to solve intractable problems for customers. 
   Allen is an avid community contributor, sharing knowledge wherever anyone will listen. He organises, assists, and speaks at conferences big and small internationally. He has written over 250 articles and his current readership exceeds 4m worldwide. 
   Allen is a chartered engineer, a Fellow of the British Computing Society, and holds qualifications in both technology and law. He is currently competing a PhD in AI.
-  His current obsessions are machine learning, big data and IoT/robotics. When not chained to his desk he can be found fixing broken things, playing music very badly or trying to shape things out of wood.  He writes for CodeProject,  C-Sharp Corner and DZone and is also a ball throwing slave for his dogs.
+  His current obsessions are machine learning, big data and IoT/robotics. When not chained to his desk he can be found fixing broken things, playing music very badly or trying to shape things out of wood.  He writes for CodeProject,  C-Sharp Corner and DZone and plays ball with his dogs.
 tagline: AI / Big Data / Robotics
 image:
   alt: "Allen ONeill"

diff --git a/rd/damir-dizdarevic.yml b/rd/damir-dizdarevic.yml
@@ -43,6 +43,6 @@ connect:
   - title: Twitter
     url: https://twitter.com/ddamirMVP
 location:
-  display: Sarajevo, Federation of Bosnia and Herzegovina, Bosnia and Herzegovina
+  display: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina
   lat: 43.85942
   long: 18.43576
diff --git a/rd/elemar-junior.yml b/rd/elemar-junior.yml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ remarks: |
 
   As a consultant, I am dealing with various aspects of cross-platform architecture and technologies. From legacy software to the cloud. From powerful servers to IoT devices. My passion is to build software solutions that can run anywhere.
 
-  I am a specialist developing software for complex domains, and in scenarios that demand computation-intensive solutions. Also, I am crazy about productivity and innovation.
+  I am a specialist developing software for complex domains, and in scenarios that demand computation-intensive solutions. Also, I am excited about productivity and innovation.
 
   The events I speak at span from technical conferences to executive-style events in various verticals with a CxO audience.
 

diff --git a/rd/index.yml b/rd/index.yml
@@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ profiles:
     src: media/profiles/damir-dizdarevic.jpg
     alt: "Damir Dizdarevic"
   location: 
-    display: Sarajevo, Federation of Bosnia and Herzegovina, Bosnia and Herzegovina
+    display: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina
     lat: 43.85942
     long: 18.43576
 - uid: rd.damir-dobric

diff --git a/rd/joel-semeniuk.yml b/rd/joel-semeniuk.yml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ remarks: |
   number of startups, however, my core company is called
   [Imaginet](http://www.imaginet.com)which I helped establish in 1997. I'm a
   serial entrepreneur - I can't stop myself. I work almost exclusively with
-  executives at either crazy large organizations or with startups on how to
+  executives at either very large organizations or with startups on how to
   reimagine business with technology such as the cloud, mobile, AI, and
   augmented reality - with special attention to technology that enables more
   efficient collaboration and productivity.

diff --git a/rd/john-peluso.yml b/rd/john-peluso.yml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ remarks: |
   management, governance/compliance and productivity solutions on the Microsoft
   Azure platform, I have the good fortune to work with some of the largest and
   most complex organizations as they begin to pivot their business to a cloud
-  first, mobile first world. While I love consulting directly with customers
+  first, mobile-first world. While I love consulting directly with customers
   about their specific needs, I am also a regular speaker at industry events and
   conferences and frequently have the good fortune to contribute to press and
   analyst research.