Update 2024-03-03-NOVA-ONE.md

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@@ -62,14 +62,14 @@ Happy days! [NOVA ONE](https://novaonenovaone.bandcamp.com/) joins us for Episod
 
 ## [Tram Cops](http://www.m-oishi.com) - contain u ii
 
-**Sarah**: **"**This track's soundscape is absolutely enchanting, treading in and out of lo-fi production but always trailing the guitar lead's lines. Love how the vocals blend into another bassline in their own right.**"**
+**Sarah**: **"**This soundscape is absolutely enchanting, treading in and out of lo-fi production but always trailing the guitar lead's lines. Love how the vocals blend into another bassline in their own right.**"**
 
 ## [C.B. Blues](https://erratum.bandcamp.com/album/knvf) - Oh, Diane
 
-**Sarah**: **"**The talkbox adds so much funk halfway through, a moment of glowy dreampop steely dan :) Would be so good to have one of those things to phone people up with, **"**
+**Sarah**: **"**The talkbox adds so much funk halfway through, a moment of glowy dreampop steely dan :)**"**
 
 ## [NOVA ONE](https://chafouin.bandcamp.com/album/trois-quatre) - you were right
 
-**Sarah**: **"**fascinated by the grittiness mastered in this track, building and eroding into the end,. especially against roz's soft-falling vocals. as roz explains, with NOVA ONE's **"**
+**Sarah**: **"**Fascinated by the grittiness within this track, building and eroding into the end -- its own atmosphere. This roughness complements, empowers, and transforms roz's soft-falling vocals, in a delightful starkness. As Roz explains, with NOVA ONE's emphasis on dreamy rhythms and vocals in the band's prior work, this departure marks the evolution in the NOVA ONE's sound and speaks to the direction they'll move into beyond this release.**"**
 
-<p id="outroduction">That's all folks! Thanks for being with us. **If you plan to be in Paris on march the 29th, book your evening... More info very very soon, watch your emails!** A thousand thanks for Valentina, Allen and Susumu from Holy Tongue. Lots of gratitude to [Patricia](https://www.instagram.com/olharesfuturos/) for her catchy illustration. Until next Sunday, stay tuned.</p>
+<p id="outroduction">That's all for today ! Thank you for being with us. Our many thanks to NOVA ONE's Roz for this Sunday selection and to Noémie Dijon for this episode's wonderful illustration.</p>