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Happy to discuss/clarify any of the feedback. Just drop me a message on Teams.

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# Fast AI Study Group

As part of an internal study group aimed at getting a good overview of

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nitpic - I'd define both acronyms (AI & ML) or neither.


As part of an internal study group aimed at getting a good overview of
AI and machine learning (ML), I conducted a deep dive into the world of
Jeremy Howard and [fast.ai](https://course.fast.ai/).

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I don't think this was your intention but I found the repeated use of Jeremy Howard's name changes the tone of the piece from a response to a piece of his work, to a response to him personally. I've removed his name here and in a few other locations where it seemed superfluous.

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Jeremy Howard and [fast.ai](https://course.fast.ai/).
[fast.ai](https://course.fast.ai/).

# Fast AI Study Group

As part of an internal study group aimed at getting a good overview of
AI and machine learning (ML), I conducted a deep dive into the world of

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I think the rest of the post uses we

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AI and machine learning (ML), I conducted a deep dive into the world of
AI and machine learning (ML), we conducted a deep dive into the world of

AI and machine learning (ML), I conducted a deep dive into the world of
Jeremy Howard and [fast.ai](https://course.fast.ai/).

Simply defined, fast.ai is a deep learning Python library that is

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To improve its readability, this section could do with being broken up.

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Simply defined, fast.ai is a deep learning Python library that is
## What is fast.ai?
Simply defined, fast.ai is a deep learning Python library that is

thus widens our technical horizon with new AI-related concepts. Some of
these concepts are not easy to grasp at first glance.

It is preferable to practice after watching a course. For our practice

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Again, this section could do with delimiting for clarity.

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It is preferable to practice after watching a course. For our practice
## Our experience
It is preferable to practice after watching a course. For our practice


## Maths

Some of the lessons explained by Jeremy Howard involve lots of maths.

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Some of the lessons explained by Jeremy Howard involve lots of maths.
Some of the lessons in the fast.ai course involve lots of maths.

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presentations and explanations of key neural networks concepts. In my
opinion, the channel offers a better understanding of neural networks. I
highly recommend their presentations, the quality is just incredible!

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I'm only picking up on this because it's quite pointed feedback. By better, do you mean that it was easier to understand or that it delivered a deeper understanding?

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introduced by Jeremy Howard (convolutional layer, U-Nets, autoencoders,
etc).

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introduced by Jeremy Howard (convolutional layer, U-Nets, autoencoders,
etc).
(convolutional layer, U-Nets, autoencoders, etc.).

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That is why we think that additional aids (other external online
courses) are required to give more detail. Looking at core concepts from
multiple perspectives is generally a crucial point in the learning
process.

We are proposing a non-exhaustive list of adjacent material that we
believe will help in fully understanding the fast.ai course provided by
Jeremy Howard.

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Minor point but no one can argue with your own lived experience (we found that) whereas you're opening yourself up to debate if you propose something.

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That is why we think that additional aids (other external online
courses) are required to give more detail. Looking at core concepts from
multiple perspectives is generally a crucial point in the learning
process.
We are proposing a non-exhaustive list of adjacent material that we
believe will help in fully understanding the fast.ai course provided by
Jeremy Howard.
Looking at core concepts from multiple perspectives is generally a
crucial point in the learning process. Therefore we are sharing the
list of additional material that we found helpful in fully understanding
the fast.ai course.

Challenge](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Souzjv6WfrY)

[Building a ML Text to Image App with Stable Diffusion in 15 Minutes \|
Coding Challenge](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7xc0Fs3fpCg)

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It's always worth adding a conclusion to a blog post to help the reader understand that it's the end of the post. A one sentence summary of the post, followed by some personal take on the content and a call to action is normally a decent formula.

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