fixing other stuff too.

about.qmd

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Amy is the Deputy Chief Data Officer and Associate Vice President. She is co-lea
 
 ![Jenny Weddle, Data Governnace Specialist](img/team/jenny-weddle.jpg){width=80%}
 
-Jenny has a background in business analytics and compliance. She leads our growing [data governance](gov/qmd) effort including development of cross-institutional data governance processes as well as internal department coordination and process development around patient and research data governance.
+Jenny has a background in business analytics and compliance. She leads our growing [data governance](gov.qmd) effort including development of cross-institutional data governance processes as well as internal department coordination and process development around patient and research data governance.
 
 
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@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Brian has more than two decades of experience in a variety of roles at the inter
 
 
 
-Sean Kross is interested in building better tools and workflows for data scientists. His background is in computer science, cognitive science, and design. He leads [Human Computer Interaction (HCI)](dss.qmd#human-computer-interaction) as part of our Translational Data Science and Software teams.
+Sean Kross is interested in building better tools and workflows for data scientists. His background is in computer science, cognitive science, and design. He leads our [Human Computer Interaction (HCI)](dss.qmd#human-computer-interaction) effort as part of our Translational Data Science and Software team.
 
 [More about Sean](https://seankross.com/)
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Sean Kross is interested in building better tools and workflows for data scienti
 
 ![Monica Gerber - Translational Analytics Manager](img/team/monica-gerber.jpg){width=80%}
 
-Monica has a background in biostatistics and epidemiology. She's interested in helping translational staff implement reproducible workflows for statistical analysis, working on ways to pair technical shifts with cultural shifts to advance science, and building inclusive data science communities. She leads [Translational Analytics](dss.qmd#translational-data-science-and-analytics) as part of our Translational Data Science and Software teams.
+Monica has a background in biostatistics and epidemiology. She's interested in helping translational staff implement reproducible workflows for statistical analysis, working on ways to pair technical shifts with cultural shifts to advance science, and building inclusive data science communities. She leads our [Clinical Data Science](dss.qmd#clinical-data-science) efforts as part of our Translational Data Science and Software team.
 
 
 [More about Monica](https://www.linkedin.com/in/monica-gerber/)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ Monica has a background in biostatistics and epidemiology. She's interested in h
 
 ![Taylor Firman - Research Informatics Data Scientist](img/team/taylor-firman.jpg){width=80%}
 
-Taylor's background is in computational biophysics, clinical bioinformatics, and high-performance computing. His work is focused on generating open source bioinformatics software tools for the Fred Hutch research community while fostering a spirit of collaboration through data consultations and community building. He leads [Research Informatics](dss.qmd#research-informatics) as part of our Translational Data Science and Software teams.
+Taylor's background is in computational biophysics, clinical bioinformatics, and high-performance computing. His work is focused on generating open source bioinformatics software tools for the Fred Hutch research community while fostering a spirit of collaboration through data consultations and community building. He leads our [Research Informatics](dss.qmd#research-informatics) efforts as part of our Translational Data Science and Software team.
 
 [More about Taylor](https://www.taylorfirman.com/)
 
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Ted Laderas has worked with lots of different data types and knows his way aroun
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 ![Abby Wall, Data Program and Porfolio Manager](img/team/abby-wall.jpg){width=80%}
 
-Abby has experience in program, product, and project management for bioinformatics software products and tools. She manages the Fred Hutch Data Initiative portfolio for translational data product and tooling development as the lead for our [Data Product Management team](tools.qmd). 
+Abby has experience in program, product, and project management for bioinformatics software products and tools. She manages the Fred Hutch Data Initiative portfolio for translational [data product and tooling development](tools.qmd) as the lead for our [Data Product Management team](tools.qmd). 
 
 
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dss.qmd

@@ -14,14 +14,14 @@ The Translational Data Science Integrated Research Center (TDS IRC) and Translat
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-## Healthcare Data Science
+## Clinical Data Science
 
-Our team supports healthcare data science at Fred Hutch by analyzing real-world data generated over the course of health care delivery, and by improving the interoperability, quality, and accessibility of these data. They collaborate with Hutch researchers and staff to understand critical questions about cancer patients, develop impactful and practical data analyses, and to develop tools that support democratized data access, exploration, and analysis.
+Our team supports clinical data science at Fred Hutch by analyzing real-world data generated over the course of health care delivery, and by improving the interoperability, quality, and accessibility of these data. They collaborate with Hutch researchers and staff to understand critical questions about cancer patients, develop impactful and practical data analyses, and to develop tools that support democratized data access, exploration, and analysis.
 
 ### Connect with us
 
 - Fred Hutch patient data access and analysis support can be requested on [Fred Hutch CenterNet](https://centernet.fredhutch.org/u/data-science-lab/patient-data.html).
-- E-mail us about partnering on other clinical research data projects: `[email protected]`.
+- E-mail us about partnering on other clinical data science projects: `[email protected]`.
 - Schedule a 20-minute[Data House Call](programs/dhc.qmd)
     + [Clinical data access](https://calendly.com/data-house-calls/clinical-data) to discuss how we can support you in accessing and using Fred Hutch patient data for research 
     + [Data wranging and visualization](https://calendly.com/data-house-calls/analysis-viz) 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Our team provides support to the community through documentation on the [Biomedi
 
 ## Human Computer Interaction
 
-The Human Computer Interaction (HCDI) team develops and enhances open-source scientific software for computational biology, bioinformatics, biostatistics, and biomedical data science, focusing on high standards of scientific rigor and providing training in software development and data analysis. Their comprehensive approach combines qualitative research, human-centered design, and software development to empower research labs with adaptable tools that meet evolving research challenges.
+The Human Computer Interaction (HCI) team develops and enhances open-source scientific software for computational biology, bioinformatics, biostatistics, and biomedical data science, focusing on high standards of scientific rigor and providing training in software development. Their comprehensive approach combines qualitative research, human-centered design, and software development to empower research labs with adaptable tools that meet evolving research challenges.
 
 ### Connect with us
 

programs/dhc.qmd

@@ -92,13 +92,13 @@ Schedule this [Data House Call](https://calendly.com/data-house-calls/sharing).
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 ### Clinical Data Access
 
-Use this Data House Call to discuss questions about Fred Hutch adult oncology clinical patient data access for research and it's oversight.
+Use this Data House Call to discuss questions about Fred Hutch adult oncology clinical patient data access, especially for research and it's oversight.
 
-- Curious about how to get access to Fred Hutch clinical patient data?
+Curious about pathways to get access to Fred Hutch clinical patient data? 
 
-- Wondering what the newly signed agreement with UW means for the data that is part of the cancer program at Fred Hutch?
+Have questions about IRB protocols and patient data for research options?
 
-- Want to learn about some of the ongoing work with DaSL, IT, Compliance, OTR and others that will be supporting the clinical data program at Fred Hutch?  
+Want to learn about some of the ongoing work with DaSL, IT, Compliance, OTR and others that will be supporting the clinical data program at Fred Hutch?
 
 This DHC is the right one. 
 

tools.qmd

@@ -6,6 +6,8 @@ toc: true
 
 As part of our overall data strategy efforts, we partner with a variety of departments across Fred Hutch to help coordinate and streamline our overall data portfolio.  This work includes aligning our technology resources with data community needs and ensuring connections between subject matter experts in issues such as technology, security and compliance to enable ethical use of data resources at Fred Hutch.  
 
+We also build data infrastructure, applications and data products to support translational use of patient data in a secure, scalable, collaborative way to bridge the gap between the clinic and research.  
+
 
 
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@@ -46,7 +48,7 @@ For more details on what the Fred Hutch instance of cBioPortal can do for you, r
 Fred Hutch is building a secure, scalable, and supportable technical infrastructure foundation and tools that provide a centrally governed, democratized platform. Upon this system, the Fred Hutch community can build data products and tooling leveraging multimodal Fred Hutch patient clinical data to support clinical care, operations, clinical trials, precision oncology, data science and AI innovation.
 
 ### CARDS
-Clinical and Research Data Solutions (CARDS) will become the foundation of the Fred Hutch Cancer Center’s new translational data ecosystem.
+Clinical and Research Data System (CARDS) will become the foundation of the Fred Hutch Cancer Center’s new translational data ecosystem.
 
 To get up to date information regarding the current state and upcoming availability opportunities please schedule a [Data House Call for Translational Data Needs](https://calendly.com/data-house-calls/cards), or email [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]).