Release: 2023-09-27

advocacy_docs/pg_extensions/advanced_storage_pack/using.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ The following are scenarios where the EDB Advanced Storage Pack TAMs are useful.
 
 ## Refdata example
 
-A scenario where Refdata is useful is when creating a reference table of all
+A scenario where Refdata is useful is creating a reference table of all
 the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE) stock symbols and their corporate names.
 This data is expected to change very rarely and be referenced frequently from a
 table tracking all stock trades for the entire market.
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ CREATE INDEX ON nyse_trade USING BTREE(nyse_symbol_id);
 ```
 
 When `heap` is used for `nyse_symbol`, manipulating rows in `nyse_trade` causes
-row locks to be created in `nyse_symbol`, but only row locks are used in
+row locks to be created in `nyse_symbol`. But only row locks are used in
 `nyse_symbol`:
 
 ```sql
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ CREATE TABLE nyse_symbol (
 ) USING refdata;
 ```
 
-In this case, manipulating data in `nyse_trade` does not generate row locks in `nyse_symbol`. But manipulating `nyse_symbol` directly cause an `EXCLUSIVE` lock to be acquired on the entire relation:
+In this case, manipulating data in `nyse_trade` doesn't generate row locks in `nyse_symbol`. But manipulating `nyse_symbol` directly causes an `EXCLUSIVE` lock to be acquired on the entire relation:
 
 ```sql
 =# BEGIN;
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ SELECT autocluster.autocluster(
 ```
 
 !!! Note
-The `cols` parameter specifies which table is clustered. In this case, `{1}` corresponds to the first column of the table, `thermostat_id`, which is the most common access pattern.
+The `cols` parameter specifies the table that's clustered. In this case, `{1}` corresponds to the first column of the table, `thermostat_id`, which is the most common access pattern.
 !!!
 
 Populate the table with the `thermostat_id` and `recordtime` data:
@@ -243,19 +243,19 @@ ANALYZE nyse_trade;
 ```
 
 Given that the inserts intercalated `nyse_symbol_id`, a query that consults one
-stock would touch most pages if the table used `heap`, but would touch far
+stock touches most pages if the table uses heap, but touches far
 fewer pages using Autocluster.
 
 The following query operates on attributes that must be fetched from the table
-after an index scan, and shows the number of buffers touched:
+after an index scan and shows the number of buffers touched:
 
 ```sql
 EXPLAIN (ANALYZE, BUFFERS, TIMING OFF, SUMMARY OFF, COSTS OFF)
     SELECT AVG(trade_volume * trade_price)
     FROM nyse_trade WHERE nyse_symbol_id = 10;
 ```
 
-This is the query plan using `autocluster`:
+This is the query plan using Autocluster:
 
 ```
                                           QUERY PLAN
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ This is the query plan using `autocluster`:
 (9 rows)
 ```
 
-For contrast, this is the query plan using `heap`:
+For contrast, this is the query plan using heap:
 
 ```
                                           QUERY PLAN

product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/overview/02_high_availability.mdx

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Distributed high-availability clusters are powered by [EDB Postgres Distributed]
 
 Distributed high-availability clusters support both EDB Postgres Advanced Server and EDB Postgres Extended Server database distributions. 
 
-Distributed high-availability clusters contain one or two data groups. Your data groups can contain either three data nodes or two data nodes and one witness node. One of these data nodes is the leader at any given time, while the rest are shadow nodes. We don't recommend you use two data nodes and one witness node in production unless you use asynchronous [commit scopes](/pgd/latest/durability/commit-scopes/). 
+Distributed high-availability clusters contain one or two data groups. Your data groups can contain either three data nodes or two data nodes and one witness node. One of these data nodes is the leader at any given time, while the rest are shadow nodes. We recommend that you don't use two data nodes and one witness node in production unless you use asynchronous [commit scopes](/pgd/latest/durability/commit-scopes/). 
 
 [PGD Proxy](/pgd/latest/routing/proxy) routes all application traffic to the leader node, which acts as the principal write target to reduce the potential for data conflicts. PGD Proxy leverages a distributed consensus model to determine availability of the data nodes in the cluster. On failure or unavailability of the leader, PGD Proxy elects a new leader and redirects application traffic. Together with the core capabilities of EDB Postgres Distributed, this mechanism of routing application traffic to the leader node enables fast failover and switchover.
 

product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/using_cluster/06_analyze_with_superset.mdx

@@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ To connect to a BigAnimal cluster:
 2. Select **Analyze > Connections**.
 3. Select **+ Database**.
 4. In the Add Database dialog box, enter a value for **Database Name**.
-5. To connect to the database, you need database user with a password. Enter the connection string for your cluster in the **SQLALCHEMY URI** field, using the following format:
+5. To connect to the database, you need a database user with a password. Enter the connection string for your cluster in the **SQLALCHEMY URI** field, using the following format:
 
     `postgresql://{<username>}:{<password>}@{<host>}:{<port>}/{<dbname>}?sslmode=verify-full`
    !!!note
-   Your password is always encrypted before storage and never leaves your cloud environment. It's used only by the Superset software running in your BigAnimal infrastructure. As a defense-in-depth mechanism, we recommend using a Postgres user dedicated to Superset with a minimal set of privileges to just the database you're connecting. Never use your edb_admin, superuser or equivalent user with Superset.
+   Your password is always encrypted before storage and never leaves your cloud environment. It's used only by the Superset software running in your BigAnimal infrastructure. As a defense-in-depth mechanism, we recommend using a Postgres user dedicated to Superset with a minimal set of privileges to just the database you're connecting. Never use your edb_admin superuser or equivalent user with Superset.
    !!!
 
 6. Check the connection by selecting **Test Connection**. Select **Add** if the connection was successful.

product_docs/docs/epas/15/reference/oracle_compatibility_reference/epas_compat_sql/29_create_profile.mdx

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ EDB Postgres Advanced Server supports these values for each parameter:
 -   `DEFAULT` — The value of `PASSWORD_LOCK_TIME` specified in the `DEFAULT` profile.
 -   `UNLIMITED` — The account is locked until manually unlocked by a database superuser.
 
-`PASSWORD_LIFE_TIME` specifies the number of days that the current password can be used before the user is prompted to provide a new password. Include the `PASSWORD_GRACE_TIME` clause when using the `PASSWORD_LIFE_TIME` clause to specify the number of days to pass after the password expires before connections by the role are rejected. If you don't specify `PASSWORD_GRACE_TIME`, the password expires on the day specified by the default value of `PASSWORD_GRACE_TIME`, and the user isn't allowed to execute any command until a new password is provided. Supported values are:
+`PASSWORD_LIFE_TIME` specifies the number of days that the current password can be used before the user is prompted to provide a new password. Include the `PASSWORD_GRACE_TIME` clause when using the `PASSWORD_LIFE_TIME` clause to specify the number of days to pass after the password expires before the user is forced to change their password. If you don't specify `PASSWORD_GRACE_TIME`, the password expires on the day specified by the default value of `PASSWORD_GRACE_TIME`, and the user isn't allowed to execute any command until a new password is provided. Supported values are:
 
 -   A `NUMERIC` value greater of `0` or greater. To specify a fractional portion of a day, specify a decimal value. For example, use the value `4.5` to specify 4 days, 12 hours.
 -   `DEFAULT` — The value of `PASSWORD_LIFE_TIME` specified in the `DEFAULT` profile.

product_docs/docs/eprs/7/installing/upgrading_replication_server/index.mdx

@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@ redirects:
 
 You can install Replication Server 7 when you have existing single-master or multi-master replication systems that are running under Replication Server version 7.
 
-It is assumed that you are installing Replication Server 7.x on the same host machine that is currently running the earlier version of Replication Server you are upgrading from and that you will then manage the existing replication systems using Replication Server 7.x.
+It's assumed that you're installing Replication Server 7.x on the same host machine that's currently running the earlier version of Replication Server you're upgrading from and that you plan to then manage the existing replication systems using Replication Server 7.x.
 
-If you are using a version of Replication Server earlier than 6.2.15, first upgrade to 6.2.15 or a later 6.2.x point version before upgrading to 7.x. 
+If you're using a version of Replication Server earlier than 6.2.15, first upgrade to 6.2.15 or a later 6.2.x point version before upgrading to 7.x. 
 
 !!!note
-   Version 7.x provides a non-breaking upgrade path for existing 6.2.x based cluster deployments; however, we strongly recommended that you verify the upgrade in a staging or nonproduction environment before applying the upgrade in a production environment. There is no downgrade path from version 7.x to version 6.2.x so it is essential to test the upgrade first before applying it to the production environment.  
+   Version 7.x provides a non-breaking upgrade path for existing 6.2.x based cluster deployments. However, we strongly recommended that you verify the upgrade in a staging or nonproduction environment before applying the upgrade in a production environment. There's no downgrade path from version 7.x to version 6.2.x, so it's essential to test the upgrade first before applying it to the production environment.  
 
 
 
@@ -27,5 +27,3 @@ For more details on upgrading Replication Server, see:
 - [Upgrading with the graphical user interface installer](upgrading_with_gui_installer)
 
 After upgrading and before using Replication Server, you need to download a JDBC driver and create a symlink to it (for Linux) or rename the driver (for Windows). See [Installing a JDBC driver](../installing_jdbc_driver/) for more information.
-
-

product_docs/docs/pem/9/troubleshooting.mdx

@@ -146,4 +146,4 @@ __OUTPUT__
 PING
 ```
 
-Where, `SERVER_ADDR` is the IP address of your PEM server. The output `PING` confirms the PEM web server is up and running.
+Where `SERVER_ADDR` is the IP address of your PEM server. The output `PING` confirms the PEM web server is up and running.