Merge pull request #5545 from EnterpriseDB/docs/edits_to_epas_pr3884

Edits to epas15 pr3884

product_docs/docs/epas/15/planning/deployment_options/aws_epas.mdx

@@ -23,16 +23,16 @@ To deploy an EDB Postgres Advanced Server instance on AWS:
 
 1. On the **Launch an instance** page, select **Choose an Amazon Machine Image(AMI)**.
 
-1. On the **Choose an Amazon Machine Image(AMI)** page, go to **AWS Marketplace AMIs** tab, type **EDB** in the search bar and choose the EDB Postgres Advanced Server image. 
+1. On the **Choose an Amazon Machine Image(AMI)** page, go to the **AWS Marketplace AMIs** tab. Enter **EDB** in the search bar.  
 
-1. Select the **EDB Postgres Advanced Server image** and review the all the tabs:
-   - Overview
-   - Product details
-   - Pricing
-   - Usage
-   - Support
+1. Select the EDB Postgres Advanced Server image and review the all the tabs:
+   - **Overview**
+   - **Product details**
+   - **Pricing**
+   - **Usage**
+   - **Support**
 
-1. Select continue to go on the **Launch an instance** page, and specify the following:
+1. Select **Continue**. On the **Launch an instance** page, specify the following:
 
    - **Name and tags** — Provide the name of the server, for example, `EDB test server`.
 
@@ -48,19 +48,19 @@ To deploy an EDB Postgres Advanced Server instance on AWS:
 
    - **Key pair (login)** — Select an existing key pair or create a new key pair. If you create a new key pair, enter a key-pair name, select a key-pair type, and select a private-key file format. Download the new key pair and move it to a location where you can access it. You need a key pair to securely connect to your instance.
 
-   - **Network settings** — For **Firewall**, select an existing security group or create a new security group. For more information, see [Network settings](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/AWSEC2/latest/UserGuide/ec2-networking.html).
+   - **Network settings** — For **Firewall**, select an existing security group or create a new security group. For more information, see [Network settings](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/AWSEC2/latest/UserGuide/ec2-networking.html) in the Amazon documentation.
 
    - **Configure storage** — Allocate the amount of storage you need for your instance.
 
    - **Advanced details** — Expand the section to view the fields and specify any additional parameters for the instance.
 
    Review the instance details in the **Summary** section on the right panel, and select **Launch instance**.
 
-   At last, you see the success message along with the instance id. Select the instance id to view the instance and see the auto-assigned IP address.
+   You see the success message along with the instance id. Select the instance id to view the instance and see the auto-assigned IP address.
 
 ## Connecting to an instance
 
-You need the auto-assigned IP address to connect to your instance. To find the IP address, select **Instances** in the navigation pane on the EC2 home page. To view the complete details of your instance, including the IP address, select the instance ID next to your instance name.
+You need the auto-assigned IP address to connect to your instance. To find the IP address, in the navigation pane on the EC2 home page, select **Instances**. To view the complete details of your instance, including the IP address, select the instance id next to your instance name.
 
 1. Open a terminal window.
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ You need the auto-assigned IP address to connect to your instance. To find the I
    ssh -i your_key_pair ec2-user@instance_ip_address
    ```
 
-   You are now connected to the AWS EC2 instance where EDB Postgres Advanced Server is installed. 
+   You're now connected to the AWS EC2 instance where EDB Postgres Advanced Server is installed. 
 
 ## Getting started with a cluster