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Release: 2023-04-12
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diff --git a/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/00_free_trial.mdx b/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/00_free_trial.mdx
@@ -2,21 +2,22 @@
 title: BigAnimal free trial
 ---
 
-EDB offers a 14-day free trial for anyone interested in exploring BigAnimal and its capabilities. The BigAnimal free trial functions like the full-featured BigAnimal so you can get a feel for what to expect. 
+EDB offers a 14-day free trial for anyone interested in exploring BigAnimal and its capabilities. The BigAnimal free trial functions like the full-featured BigAnimal, so you can get a feel for what to expect. 
 
 To get the most out of the free trial quickly, see [Quick start for the BigAnimal free trial](../free_trial/quickstart.mdx).
 
 ## How to start your free trial
 You can request a BigAnimal free trial from several locations:
-- The EDB [Get started](https://www.enterprisedb.com/get-started) sign-up page
+- The EDB [Get started](https://www.enterprisedb.com/get-started) signup page
 - The [BigAnimal home page](https://www.enterprisedb.com/products/biganimal-cloud-postgresql)
 - The EDB login page
 
 ## What you can do with your free trial
-- The free trial lasts for 14 days. The count begins when you provision a cluster. 
+The free trial lasts for 14 days. The count begins when you provision a cluster. 
+
 - You can provision a single cluster using either PostgreSQL or EDB Postgres Advanced Server:
 
-  | Cluster Details | On Azure                                      | On AWS                                                |
+  | Cluster details | On Azure                                      | On AWS                                                |
   | --------------- | --------------------------------------------- | ----------------------------------------------------- |
   | Region          | Either US East 2 or West Europe (Netherlands) | Either US-East 1 (N. Virginia) or EU-West-1 (Ireland) |
   | Instance Type   | Esv3 series 2 vCPU with 16 GB RAM             | r5.large                                              |
@@ -25,24 +26,24 @@ You can request a BigAnimal free trial from several locations:
 
    -  Numerous other instance types, storage types, and regions are available with a paid account.
 
-   - If you delete your cluster within the 14 day trial period, you can restore that cluster or create a new one.
+   - If you delete your cluster within the 14-day trial period, you can restore that cluster or create a new one.
 
-   - You can try out a different cloud provider by creating, using, and then deleting your cluster on one provider and then provisioning a new cluster using the other provider within the same 14 day trial period. 
+   - You can try out a different cloud provider by creating, using, and then deleting your cluster on one provider and then provisioning a new cluster using the other provider within the same 14-day trial period. 
 
 - During the trial, you have access to EDB enterprise-level support.
 - You can connect to your database cluster. 
 - You can edit the database configuration for a cluster and view the activity log for the service.
 - You get an understanding of what account management looks like in BigAnimal.
 
 ## What you can’t do
-Since this is a free trial, there are a few nuances and limitations to what you can do with a free account:
+Since it's a free trial, there are a few nuances and limitations to what you can do with a free account:
 
-- You cannot invite team members to join your cluster or assign roles in the free trial. Other team members should create their own free trial account to explore BigAnimal. 
+- You can't invite team members to join your cluster or assign roles in the free trial. Other team members must create their own free trial account to explore BigAnimal. 
 
-- The BigAnimal Free Trial interface notes which features are not available in the free trial. No private networking or superuser access is available in the trial. High availability, logging, monitoring, and performance benchmarking are also not available. 
+- The BigAnimal Free Trial interface notes the features that aren't available in the free trial. No private networking or superuser access is available in the trial. High availability, logging, monitoring, and performance benchmarking are also not available. 
 
 ## What happens when the free trial ends 
 
-Within the BigAnimal Free Trial interface, a countdown displays the time remaining for your free trial. 
+In the BigAnimal Free Trial interface, a countdown displays the time remaining for your free trial. 
 
-When the free trial ends, your account continues to exist but your cluster and its backup and data are deleted. You cannot transfer your cluster from the free trial to a paid account. Your free trial account is separate from a paid BigAnimal account. 
+When the free trial ends, your account continues to exist, but your cluster and its backup and data are deleted. You can't transfer your cluster from the free trial to a paid account. Your free trial account is separate from a paid BigAnimal account. 
diff --git a/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/02_azure_market_setup.mdx b/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/02_azure_market_setup.mdx
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ redirects:
 
 Connect your cloud account with your Azure subscription.
 
-Before starting, within Azure Active Directory, ensure your user type is Member (not Guest).
+Before starting, in Azure Active Directory, ensure your user type is Member (not Guest).
 
 ## 1. Select the EDB offer in the Azure portal.
 
@@ -43,19 +43,19 @@ Before starting, within Azure Active Directory, ensure your user type is Member
 
 ## What's next
 
-You are now able to:
+You can now:
 
 - [Log in to BigAnimal](#log-in)
 - [Invite new users](#invite-users)
 - [Set up your cloud service provider](02_connecting_to_your_cloud/)
 
 ### Log in
 
-You can now log in to your BigAnimal account using your Azure AD identity.
+You can log in to your BigAnimal account using your Azure AD identity.
 
 ### Invite users
 
-You can invite new users by sharing the link to the BigAnimal portal and having them log in with their Microsoft Azure Active Directory account. New users are not assigned any roles by default. After they log in the first time, you see them in the User Management list and can assign them a role with permissions to BigAnimal. See [Users](/biganimal/release/administering_cluster/01_portal_access/#users) for instructions.
+You can invite new users by sharing the link to the BigAnimal portal and having them log in with their Microsoft Azure Active Directory account. New users aren't assigned any roles by default. After they log in the first time, you see them in the User Management list and can assign them a role with permissions to BigAnimal. See [Users](/biganimal/release/administering_cluster/01_portal_access/#users) for instructions.
 
 !!! Note
     Azure AD email domain is likely different from the email domain regularly used by your organization.
diff --git a/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/activating_regions.mdx b/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/activating_regions.mdx
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ title: "Activating regions"
 
 ---
 
-When you activate a region, BigAnimal prepares the compute and networking resources required to deploy clusters. Note that these added resources can increase your cloud costs. 
+When you activate a region, BigAnimal prepares the compute and networking resources required to deploy clusters. These added resources can increase your cloud costs. 
 
-You must activate a region prior to creating or restoring a cluster. 
+You must activate a region before creating or restoring a cluster. 
 
 Each region you activate displays a status. The status is available on the Create cluster and Restore cluster pages and the Regions page. For more information on the different region statuses, see [Region status reference](#region-status-reference).
 
@@ -15,37 +15,37 @@ Each region you activate displays a status. The status is available on the Creat
 
 You can activate a region ahead of time using the **Regions** page. 
 
-1. To activate a region ahead of cluster creation, go to the **Regions** page.
+1. To activate a region before creating a cluster, go to the **Regions** page.
 
-1. If you haven't set up your cloud server provider (CSP), you are prompted to do so. See [Connecting your cloud](/biganimal/latest/getting_started/02_connecting_to_your_cloud/).
+1. If you haven't set up your cloud server provider (CSP), you're prompted to do so. See [Connecting your cloud](/biganimal/latest/getting_started/02_connecting_to_your_cloud/).
 
-1. When your cloud server provider is set up, you see a list of regions associated with it on the Regions page.
+   When your cloud server provider is set up, you see a list of regions associated with it on the Regions page.
 
-1. Select **Activate New Region**, select your cloud provider, and the region you want to activate. You can activate multiple regions where you plan on adding clusters. 
+1. Select **Activate New Region**, and select your cloud provider and the region you want to activate. You can activate multiple regions where you plan on adding clusters. 
 
 1. Select **Activate Region(s)**.
 
 ## Suspend, reactivate, or delete a region
 
-Before you suspend or delete a region you must delete all clusters in that region.
+Before you suspend or delete a region, you must delete all clusters in that region.
 
 1. On the left panel, select **Regions**.
 
-1. A list of previously activated regions appears. 
+   A list of previously activated regions appears. 
 
 1. Select the icons next to a region to: 
-   - suspend or delete an active region. 
-   - reactivate a suspended region.
+   - Suspend or delete an active region. 
+   - Reactivate a suspended region.
 
 ## Region status reference
 
 | Status | Description                                                                                                                                            |
 |--------------|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
-| Activating       | You have activated the region and BigAnimal is setting up the compute and networking resources to support the cluster you requested. Backups and logs aren't available yet.                                                                         | 
-| Active       | BigAnimal has completed setting up the compute and networking resources. The region has at least one cluster and you can create more. The region has backups and logs.                                                                  |
+| Activating       | You have activated the region, and BigAnimal is setting up the compute and networking resources to support the cluster you requested. Backups and logs aren't available yet.                                                                         | 
+| Active       | BigAnimal has completed setting up the compute and networking resources. The region has at least one cluster, and you can create more. The region has backups and logs.                                                                  |
 | Suspended    | You have deleted any active clusters. BigAnimal has removed the compute and networking resources. The backups and logs are still available. BigAnimal continues to maintain backups and logs based on the retention period set when the cluster was last active.  |
-| Deleted      | You have deleted the clusters. BigAnimal has removed the compute and networking resources. The backups and logs are no longer available. Only Account Owners can delete a region.                                            |
-| Error        | An error occurred while trying to activate or suspend the region. The cause may be a quota issue. See the topic for your cloud provider under [Checking your cloud readiness](/biganimal/latest/getting_started/preparing_cloud_account/) for information on checking whether requirements and resource limits are met and how to raise them, if needed. Contact [EDB support](/biganimal/release/overview/support) if you need additional help troubleshooting the error.  | 
+| Deleted      | You have deleted the clusters. BigAnimal has removed the compute and networking resources. The backups and logs are no longer available. Only account owners can delete a region.                                            |
+| Error        | An error occurred while trying to activate or suspend the region. The cause might be a quota issue. See the topic for your cloud provider under [Checking your cloud readiness](/biganimal/latest/getting_started/preparing_cloud_account/) for information on checking whether requirements and resource limits are met and how to raise them, if needed. Contact [EDB Support](/biganimal/release/overview/support) if you need additional help troubleshooting the error.  | 
 
 ## See also
 

diff --git a/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/index.mdx b/product_docs/docs/biganimal/release/getting_started/index.mdx
@@ -11,10 +11,13 @@ navigation:
  - creating_a_cluster
 ---
 
-As a cloud administrator, you can set up BigAnimal with your existing Azure subscription or AWS account, invite others to join you in exploring what EDB has to offer, and create initial clusters as an account owner so that development can begin. 
+As a cloud administrator, you can:
+-  Set up BigAnimal with your existing Azure subscription or AWS account.
+-  Invite others to join you in exploring what EDB has to offer.
+-  Create initial clusters as an account owner so that development can begin. 
 
 <!-- Alternatively, you can use [BigAnimal's Terraform provider](../using_cluster/terraform_provider) to incorporate BigAnimal into your existing cloud infrastructure workflows.  -->
 
-If you purchase BigAnimal directly from EDB Sales, you need to [set up your own identity provider](/biganimal/release/getting_started/identity_provider). If you purchased from Azure Marketplace, you need to [set up your Azure account](/biganimal/release/getting_started/02_azure_market_setup). 
+If you purchased BigAnimal directly from EDB Sales, you need to [set up your own identity provider](/biganimal/release/getting_started/identity_provider). If you purchased from Azure Marketplace, you need to [set up your Azure account](/biganimal/release/getting_started/02_azure_market_setup). 
 
 After setting up your organization through your identity provider or Azure Marketplace account, you connect your cloud account to BigAnimal.