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Update README.md: typo & grammar improvements #622

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Description:
While checking out a PR linking this repo in the MicrosoftDocs/windowsserverdocs repository, I noticed the title typo and some English grammar inconsistencies. I propose to improve some of the text in this README.md file for clarity and readability.

Changes proposed:

  • Title typo correction: Sesson -> Session
  • Added missing definite article "the" several places
  • Replaced plus sign ( + ) with hyphen ( - ) as default MarkDown bullet point list marker
  • Moved closing angle bracket inside the back ticks
  • Rephrased "Template does the following" to "This template [ … ]"
  • Capitalized first word in the bullet list
  • Added minor grammar improvements
  • Added bold formatting to "Note:"
  • Rephrased the last sentence for readability

Additional notes:
I tried to find a better phrasing for the sentence "Click the button below to deploy:", but I was too uncertain of the difference between them to be sure that the resulting sentence would differentiate them correctly. Feel free to suggest how that sentence can be improved.

Also note my changes in the last sentence I have made changes to; feel free to ask me to rephrase that part to make sure the intended meaning is kept unchanged.

- Title typo correction: Sesson -> Session
- Added missing definite article "the" several places
- Moved closing angle bracket inside the back ticks
- Rephrased "Template does the following" to "This template [ ... ]"
- Capitalized first word in the bullet list
- Added minor grammar improvements
- Added **bold** formatting to "Note:"
- Rephrased the last sentence for readability
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