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[Fix][Add] Update verbiage in LW and DSC + add PoH Callouts
AudioLotus · Feb 15, 2024 · 2bb2335 · 2bb2335
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diff --git a/docs/Dungeons/Pit-of-Heresy/index.md b/docs/Dungeons/Pit-of-Heresy/index.md
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ So thankfully this dungeon is pretty consistent with its mechanics and they're f
 
 You'll find with most Hive related encounters over the different seasons and DLC that there are various runes. As is tradition, each team has different callouts for them. Here are the ones I use:
 
-[Insert pic here ]
+![Pit of Heresy Callouts](assets/img/PoH-Callouts.png)
 
 In my experience with Pit, you won't be verbally calling these out a lot. However, they're still nice to know in case they need communicated.
 

diff --git a/docs/Raids/Last-Wish/1-Kalli.md b/docs/Raids/Last-Wish/1-Kalli.md
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Everyone has about 10 seconds to enter one of the open doors and hide in the lit
 
 After the doors close, a huge wave of energy will wash over the field and the doors will reopen. If you do not enter a room **you will die**.  
 
-Guardians should exit and find Kalli below another set of symbols. Continue dps.  
+When it's safe. exit and find Kalli below another set of symbols. Continue dps.  
 
 > [!alt] Alternative Method  
 > Some people like to number the open rooms 1-6 from top to bottom. To me, musical chairs is more fun. This mattered more when the raid first came out.  

diff --git a/docs/Raids/Last-Wish/4-The-Goddamn-Vault.md b/docs/Raids/Last-Wish/4-The-Goddamn-Vault.md
@@ -79,27 +79,20 @@ Here's an example:
 
 === "Step One"
 
-    Stairs calls out their center symbol as 8 snake. (1) 
+    Stairs calls out their center symbol as 8 snake ![8 snake](../../assets/img/LW-8snake.svg){ width="50" color="white" } 
     Trees sees this on their left and notes they are Penumbra by saying "Trees left".
-    { .annotate }
-    1.  ![8 snake](../../assets/img/LW-8snake.svg){ width="50" color="white" }
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+
 
 === "Step Two"
 
-    Trees calls out that their center symbol is cloud snake. (1) 
+    Trees calls out that their center symbol is cloud snake. ![Cloud snake](../../assets/img/LW-Cloud-Snake.svg){ width="50" color="white" }
     Rocks sees this on their right and notes they are Antumbra by saying "Rocks right"
-    { .annotate }
-    1.  ![8 snake](../../assets/img/LW-Cloud-Snake.svg){ width="50" color="white" }
 
 
 === "Step Three"
 
-    Rock sees their middle symbol is infinity snake (1) 
+    Rock sees their middle symbol is infinity snake ![Infinity snake](../../assets/img/LW-Infin-Snake.svg){ width="50" color="white" }
     Since Stairs is the only one left, they see this on their right and notes they are also Antumbra by saying "Stairs right"
-    { .annotate }
-    1.  ![8 snake](../../assets/img/LW-Infin-Snake.svg){ width="50" color="white" }
-
 
 Note: It is best to have someone record all of this down by either writing it chat either like `Trees Ant` / `TA` or `Stairs Pen` / `SP`. Or just use the website I mentioned in the intro. Up to you.