diff --git a/app/(pages)/(empty)/share/[subjectId]/layout.tsx b/app/(pages)/(empty)/share/[subjectId]/layout.tsx
index 5762c665..f284ab25 100644
--- a/app/(pages)/(empty)/share/[subjectId]/layout.tsx
+++ b/app/(pages)/(empty)/share/[subjectId]/layout.tsx
@@ -52,10 +52,10 @@ const Layout = async ({ children, params }: LayoutProps) => {
           ) : (
             <>
               <span className="text-sm leading-tight text-fg-4">
-                <span className="text-fg-2">llog</span>&mdash;the app for
-                collaborative data
+                <span className="text-fg-2">llog</span>&mdash;collaboratively
+                conquer
                 <br />
-                recording and progress tracking.
+                challenging behavior cases.
               </span>
               <Button href="/sign-up" size="sm">
                 Sign up
diff --git a/app/(pages)/(marketing)/page.tsx b/app/(pages)/(marketing)/page.tsx
index 55388daa..76c82f7e 100644
--- a/app/(pages)/(marketing)/page.tsx
+++ b/app/(pages)/(marketing)/page.tsx
@@ -6,8 +6,7 @@ const Page = () => (
   <div className="mx-auto flex min-h-full max-w-2xl select-text flex-col items-center justify-center px-6 py-16 text-center">
     <Logo className="size-16" />
     <h1 className="mt-14 max-w-sm text-2xl font-bold md:max-w-xl md:text-4xl">
-      <span className="text-fg-1">llog</span>&mdash;achieve lasting behavior
-      changes with your&nbsp;clients.
+      <span className="text-fg-1">llog</span>&mdash;collaboratively conquer challenging behavior cases.
     </h1>
     <p className="mx-auto mt-6 max-w-sm">
       Streamline <span className="font-bold text-fg-1">data collection</span>,
diff --git a/app/(pages)/layout.tsx b/app/(pages)/layout.tsx
index cdf39946..d4857ee7 100644
--- a/app/(pages)/layout.tsx
+++ b/app/(pages)/layout.tsx
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ const mono = Inconsolata({ subsets: ['latin'], variable: '--font-mono' });
 
 export const metadata = {
   description:
-    'Achieve lasting behavior changes with your clients. Streamline data collection, create data-driven protocols and easily monitor progress.',
+    'Collaboratively conquer challenging behavior cases. Streamline data collection, create data-driven protocols and easily monitor progress.',
   robots:
     process.env.VERCEL_ENV === 'production'
       ? undefined