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《The Self-Cultivation of Leeks》全文中(可能存在的)问题的整理 #10

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FenghuaY opened this issue Apr 3, 2019 · 3 comments

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FenghuaY commented Apr 3, 2019

之前以为不会有回应,而且自己不会用Pull requests(感到羞愧),所以就没有接着写了。没想到王渊源老师回复了,哈哈,虽然回头找这些小错误比当时费劲些,但既然写了那就要写完吧。我挺有可能出错的,还是欢迎指正:

英文翻译缺失:

第14章:

第4段:这明显是小孩子才有的不切实际的念头,然而,冲进交易市场之后,在外面那么“成熟”的人,突然之间又开始极度幼稚起来……

第15章:

第2段:观察得越多,我越相信是后者。

第17章:

倒数第7段:自己去查它的股价历史数据罢……

结语:

倒数第2段: 你,凭什么是韭菜?!

单词/字符错误:

第2章:

第7段:- As soon as you sell, the price will rise… It’s simply infuriating! 后面这句“ It’s simply infuriating! ” 应该换行,与前一句分离开。

第3章:

倒数第2段:So, “mending the pen after after the sheep is lost” has some prerequisites: 去掉一个after
第10章:

第4段:alway 改成always

第11段:In the above example, the actual cost comes from the the pressure you feel 去掉一个the

第11章:

倒数第2段:In they end, all they can do 改成 In the end

第12章:

第13段:……actively increasing your risk/reward ratio, because you actively decreased the denominator (return), without decreasing the numerator (risk).
应更正为
……actively decreasing your risk/reward ratio, because you actively increased the expectation of denominator (return), without increased the numerator (risk).
【increasing改成decreasing,两处decreased 都改成 increased,而且是the expectation of denominator(return)】
【原文:……主动提高了回报风险比,因为你在没有改变分母(风险)的情况下,主动提高了对分子(回报)的预期。】

第15章:

第10段: 1. It seems that the percentage of people 加一个bad:the percentage of bad people

第16章:

标题: The correct way to increase risk/reward ratio… 改成 decrease

第17章:

倒数第8段:since my I don’t spend much money anyway. 去掉一个 my

第22章:

第4段:a true cycle is often only truly apparent after multiple cycles (at least two). 应该是 a true trend is often only……
【原文:真正的趋势常常需要在多个周期(至少 2 个)之后才能真实展现。】

第5段:If we look deeply into true cycles…… 改成 true trends

第6段:……that we are on a globe and and not a flat surface.去掉一个and

倒数第4段:the do you suppose that you…… 改成then do you suppose that you……

附录:(第1章)

第8段:I was full of ambition, but I only used just over 10,000 USD to……改为I was not full of ambition, I only used just over 10,000 USD to……
【原文:野心不大,只动用了一万多美元……】

@FenghuaY
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FenghuaY commented Apr 3, 2019

正好这几天总结完了这本书,前一篇Issue落下的几处前13章节的几处也一起写上来了,嘿嘿!这应该是我能够找到的全部了,有一种参与本书编辑的感觉,甚是荣幸!

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xiaolai commented Mar 25, 2020

请直接提交 pull request,分条提交。

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cloudancer commented Apr 13, 2020

第5章,结尾处买入时机,有错别字
万马齐暗,应该是万马齐喑

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