From 155e04120a4fca625204dbda7d8d59fb78125434 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Wilson <cwilso@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Apr 2024 11:10:04 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Split diverse perspectives and inclusion points

Fixes #169
---
 Vision/Vision.bs | 22 ++++++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Vision/Vision.bs b/Vision/Vision.bs
index a5412ed..a71dfc6 100644
--- a/Vision/Vision.bs
+++ b/Vision/Vision.bs
@@ -128,19 +128,25 @@ Markup Shorthands: markdown yes
 		**Multi-stakeholder**: We intentionally involve stakeholders from end to end
 		in building the Web: developers, content creators, and end users. 
 		Our work will not be dominated by any person, company, or interest group.
-	<li id=diversity>
-		**Diversity**: We believe in diversity
-		and inclusion of participants from different
-		geographical locations,
+	<li id=inclusion>
+		**Inclusion**: We believe in actively including
+		and providing a welcoming environment for
+		participants from different
 		cultures,
-		languages,
-		disabilities,
+		speaking different languages,
+		with different disabilities,
 		gender identities,
+		and more.
+		In order to ensure W3C reflects the entire Web user base, 
+		we will actively seek to be welcoming to all.
+	<li id=diversity>
+		**Diversity of Perspective**: We believe in seeking diversity
+		of perspectives from different
+		geographical locales,
 		industries,
 		organizational sizes,
 		and more.
-		In order to ensure W3C serves the needs of the entire Web user base, 
-		we also strive to broaden diversity and inclusion for our own participants.
+		This serves to ensure W3C serves the needs of the entire Web user base.
 	<li id=review>
 		**Thorough Review**:
 		We ensure the technical standards of the Web use broad and 

From 26898f8d4231d7ae829f929da91d0da85aa53cdf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Wilson <cwilso@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Apr 2024 13:35:48 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] grammatical tweak

Fixes #169
---
 Vision/Vision.bs | 3 ++-
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Vision/Vision.bs b/Vision/Vision.bs
index a71dfc6..d0eea45 100644
--- a/Vision/Vision.bs
+++ b/Vision/Vision.bs
@@ -142,11 +142,12 @@ Markup Shorthands: markdown yes
 	<li id=diversity>
 		**Diversity of Perspective**: We believe in seeking diversity
 		of perspectives from different
+		backgrounds,
 		geographical locales,
 		industries,
 		organizational sizes,
 		and more.
-		This serves to ensure W3C serves the needs of the entire Web user base.
+		This ensures W3C serves the needs of the entire Web user base.
 	<li id=review>
 		**Thorough Review**:
 		We ensure the technical standards of the Web use broad and 

From 7a03fa6e68133b4f9dbc735d90597407a5495df6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Wilson <cwilso@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Apr 2024 13:40:58 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] continuing to tweak language

---
 Vision/Vision.bs | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Vision/Vision.bs b/Vision/Vision.bs
index d0eea45..2cd3ae0 100644
--- a/Vision/Vision.bs
+++ b/Vision/Vision.bs
@@ -131,14 +131,14 @@ Markup Shorthands: markdown yes
 	<li id=inclusion>
 		**Inclusion**: We believe in actively including
 		and providing a welcoming environment for
-		participants from different
+		participants of different
 		cultures,
-		speaking different languages,
-		with different disabilities,
+		languages,
+		disabilities,
 		gender identities,
 		and more.
 		In order to ensure W3C reflects the entire Web user base, 
-		we will actively seek to be welcoming to all.
+		we will actively seek to be inclusive to all.
 	<li id=diversity>
 		**Diversity of Perspective**: We believe in seeking diversity
 		of perspectives from different