From 38d11af9df56911dbe7dabcd5aafb1292034cbbb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kareid Date: Mon, 17 Jan 2022 09:57:00 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Adjust grammar (#3) This sentence was hard to understand, possibly not gramatical, so I made it clearer. --- content/collecting-data-honestly/index.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/collecting-data-honestly/index.md b/content/collecting-data-honestly/index.md index 3cd8cde..4a54ce9 100644 --- a/content/collecting-data-honestly/index.md +++ b/content/collecting-data-honestly/index.md @@ -132,9 +132,9 @@ permission fatigue that results in the blanket consent for any task. Where informed consent is inappropriate, transparency is essential. Many security products feature audit logs, but those audit logs are rarely readily accessible to end-users who stand to lose the most when a bad-actor abuses their -access to their work device. In order for the automatic accountability -transparency brings to bear, it must be consistently applied to all mechanisms -available to the administrators to obtain data. +access to their work device. In order for the automatic accountability of +transparency to apply, it must be consistently applied to all mechanisms +available to obtain data. ### Example: A Privacy Center