From a07c5af0090a1bbeb28c53c806315ecb282d9f1e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 12:13:14 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/8] fix wording for warnings --- src/docs/firmware/index.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/docs/firmware/index.md b/src/docs/firmware/index.md index c52ff3e3..8b412b1b 100644 --- a/src/docs/firmware/index.md +++ b/src/docs/firmware/index.md @@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ next: supported-devices # Flashing Custom Firmware ::: danger -You are about to make **unofficial** changes to your device! This will likely **void any warranty.** We provide **zero warranty** if you encounter bugs, brick your device, lose your job because the alarm clock didn't go off, or if a thermonuclear war starts. **You are doing all changes at your own risk**! +You are about to make **unofficial** changes to your device! This will **void any warranty** that came with your original purchae. We provide **zero warranty** if you encounter bugs, brick your device, lose your job because the alarm clock didn't go off, or if a thermonuclear war starts. **You are doing all changes at your own risk**! ::: ::: danger -Do not continue if your device is currently owned or enrolled by a organization, such as a school or employer. Unless you were given permission by your organization, it is a crime. +Do not continue if your device is currently owned or enrolled by a organization, such as a school or employer, unless you were given **direct permission to do so.** ::: ## Prerequisites @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Only x86_64 devices are currently supported. ::: ::: tip -If you only have one device, please be sure to [setup a usb with your OS to install](ventoy.md) before flashing. +If you only have one device, please be sure to [setup a USB with your OS to install](ventoy.md) before flashing. ::: ## Asking for help properly From 129edfc70d41fc2ab1ed2aab15bf85938f95dd60 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 12:15:08 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/8] change amd hackintosh support --- supported-devices/template.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/supported-devices/template.md b/supported-devices/template.md index 1f2fa9de..27e8d2b6 100644 --- a/supported-devices/template.md +++ b/supported-devices/template.md @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ A device having firmware available (either RW_LEGACY or UEFI Full ROM) does not | Intel | AMD | ARM | | - | - | - | -| Intel platforms have good support for both Linux and Windows. Some have support for macOS. | Stoneyridge support in Windows is questionable, and installing a custom kernel is required to get working audio in Linux. Ryzen has support for both Linux and Windows. MacOS is unsupported on all AMD platforms. | Currently unsupported by the Chrultrabook dev team. [PostmarketOS](https://wiki.postmarketos.org/wiki/Chrome_OS_devices) has support for a few ARM Chromebooks. | +| Intel platforms have good support for both Linux and Windows. Some have support for macOS. | Stoneyridge support in Windows is questionable, and installing a custom kernel is required to get working audio in Linux. Ryzen has support for both Linux and Windows. MacOS is **untested** on AMD platforms. | Currently unsupported by the Chrultrabook dev team. [PostmarketOS](https://wiki.postmarketos.org/wiki/Chrome_OS_devices) has support for a few ARM Chromebooks. | ## Firmware and OS Support From c57466a6217acebe855bf8b02cc17b1c992702c5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 12:16:07 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 3/8] fix capitalization --- src/docs/firmware/developer-mode.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/docs/firmware/developer-mode.md b/src/docs/firmware/developer-mode.md index bd9685f3..12b6bad5 100644 --- a/src/docs/firmware/developer-mode.md +++ b/src/docs/firmware/developer-mode.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ next: write-protect --- # Developer Mode -Enabling [developer mode](https://chromium.googlesource.com/chromiumos/docs/+/HEAD/developer_mode.md) is the first step to running an alternate OS on your chromebook! Developer Mode is an alternate mode that all chromeOS devices have that opens up the ability to make unverified changes to the operating system and hardware. +Enabling [developer mode](https://chromium.googlesource.com/chromiumos/docs/+/HEAD/developer_mode.md) is the first step to running an alternate OS on your Chromebook! Developer Mode is an alternate mode that all chromeOS devices have that opens up the ability to make unverified changes to the operating system and hardware. ::: danger Doing this will wipe **all** user data! Make backups if needed before proceeding. From 9339e609b7acc43b0ebeeb616a98cc9e8f63de17 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 12:17:15 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 4/8] elaborate on what the "feet" is --- src/docs/firmware/battery.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/docs/firmware/battery.md b/src/docs/firmware/battery.md index 0d0e7883..68362e1e 100644 --- a/src/docs/firmware/battery.md +++ b/src/docs/firmware/battery.md @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ This method requires opening your device. Be sure to use the correct tools to pr 2. Take out all of the screws. ::: tip -Screws may be underneath "feet", or the material that keeps the Chromebook from sliding. +Screws may be underneath "feet", or the material (usually rubber) that keeps the Chromebook from sliding. ::: 3. Gently pry the back off the Chromebook. If you do not have the proper tools a dull knife would be helpful. From e3f945e1a772eca31c9e90987e8997806316c06d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 12:17:47 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 5/8] what the sigma --- src/docs/firmware/updating-firmware.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/docs/firmware/updating-firmware.md b/src/docs/firmware/updating-firmware.md index aab444e1..f240ea5a 100644 --- a/src/docs/firmware/updating-firmware.md +++ b/src/docs/firmware/updating-firmware.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ The script does not work on Windows. If you are using Windows, boot a live Linux curl is not installed by default for Ubuntu / Ubuntu distros. To install it, run: `sudo apt update && sudo apt install -y curl` ::: -1. Run [MrChromebox's firmware utility script](https://mrchromebox.tech/#fwscript). +1. Run [MrChromebox's Firmware Utility Script](https://mrchromebox.tech/#fwscript). * In case you forgot, type `cd; curl -LO mrchromebox.tech/firmware-util.sh && sudo bash firmware-util.sh` and press Enter. 2. Choose option 1: `Install/Update UEFI (Full ROM) Firmware`, and reboot if successful. From f2e21d2e7ac588735309f8b0fb5cb293766cd8cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2024 12:18:56 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 6/8] remove my contact from this page --- src/docs/unbricking/unbrick-flipper.md | 4 ---- 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/docs/unbricking/unbrick-flipper.md b/src/docs/unbricking/unbrick-flipper.md index 1fd338aa..48caced9 100644 --- a/src/docs/unbricking/unbrick-flipper.md +++ b/src/docs/unbricking/unbrick-flipper.md @@ -57,7 +57,3 @@ Go back to `Apps -> GPIO -> SPI Mem Manager -> Saved -> Yourfilename.bin`. Open ### Step 6 Assuming all went well, you should no longer have a unbricked system. - -## Got Questions? - -Please ask in the Chrultrabook Discord, or email me (meghan6) at [meghann6@proton.me](mailto:meghann6@proton.me). From d4981f6f5366e0122297a16d8662251756a476b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Thu, 6 Jun 2024 17:39:52 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 7/8] typo fix --- src/docs/firmware/index.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/docs/firmware/index.md b/src/docs/firmware/index.md index 8b412b1b..cf1b916f 100644 --- a/src/docs/firmware/index.md +++ b/src/docs/firmware/index.md @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ next: supported-devices # Flashing Custom Firmware ::: danger -You are about to make **unofficial** changes to your device! This will **void any warranty** that came with your original purchae. We provide **zero warranty** if you encounter bugs, brick your device, lose your job because the alarm clock didn't go off, or if a thermonuclear war starts. **You are doing all changes at your own risk**! +You are about to make **unofficial** changes to your device! This will **void any warranty** that came with your original purchase. We provide **zero warranty** if you encounter bugs, brick your device, lose your job because the alarm clock didn't go off, or if a thermonuclear war starts. **You are doing all changes at your own risk**! ::: ::: danger From 1a97f71d504b66a3a07e1a4d144587c865281d28 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meghan06 Date: Thu, 6 Jun 2024 17:40:41 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 8/8] fix wording for rubber feet --- src/docs/firmware/battery.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/docs/firmware/battery.md b/src/docs/firmware/battery.md index 68362e1e..46ee5256 100644 --- a/src/docs/firmware/battery.md +++ b/src/docs/firmware/battery.md @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ This method requires opening your device. Be sure to use the correct tools to pr 2. Take out all of the screws. ::: tip -Screws may be underneath "feet", or the material (usually rubber) that keeps the Chromebook from sliding. +Screws may be underneath the rubber feet that keep the Chromebook from sliding. ::: 3. Gently pry the back off the Chromebook. If you do not have the proper tools a dull knife would be helpful.