From d63f533be3bae1b7ddb79360aeb369a928042bfc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Giddy Date: Mon, 11 Sep 2023 00:03:11 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review --- adventure/James Introcaso; Planet_of_Tarrasques.json | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/adventure/James Introcaso; Planet_of_Tarrasques.json b/adventure/James Introcaso; Planet_of_Tarrasques.json index 168c66edd2..90a0455874 100644 --- a/adventure/James Introcaso; Planet_of_Tarrasques.json +++ b/adventure/James Introcaso; Planet_of_Tarrasques.json @@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ ], "adventureData": [ { - "id": "PotTarr", - "source": "PotTarr", + "id": "PlanetTarrasques", + "source": "PlanetTarrasques", "data": [ { "type": "section", @@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ "page": 7, "entries": [ "While the adventurers enjoy downtime at the Yawning Portal, a sudden shriek piercing the tavern's revelry as forty 7-foot-tall hippopotamusheaded humanoids ({@creature giff|MPMM} in appendix A) armed with muskets, pistols, grenades, and swords climb over the side of the well that leads to Undermountain. The first giff to emerge wears a bicorn hat on her head.", - "She raises her hands in a sign of peace to silence the crowd and then introduces herself as Lieutenant {@creature Dorabeth Rumpington|PotTarr}, leader of the {@b Smoke Eaters}, the 525th Giff Platoon. She politely asks to speak to the most accomplished warriors in the tavern. If the characters don't volunteer themselves, Durnan and the regulars in the Yawning Portal are quick to point the party out.", + "She raises her hands in a sign of peace to silence the crowd and then introduces herself as Lieutenant {@creature Dorabeth Rumpington|PlanetTarrasques}, leader of the {@b Smoke Eaters}, the 525th Giff Platoon. She politely asks to speak to the most accomplished warriors in the tavern. If the characters don't volunteer themselves, Durnan and the regulars in the Yawning Portal are quick to point the party out.", { "type": "image", "page": 7, @@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@ "name": "Meeting with Laeral", "page": 8, "entries": [ - "{@creature Laeral Silverhand|WDH} (see appendix A) agrees to meet with the characters and Lieutenant {@creature Dorabeth Rumpington|PotTarr} in a meeting room at Castle Waterdeep. An escort of twenty {@creature veterans|MM} guards Laeral. After introductions, Dorabeth tells Laeral the same story she shared with the characters then demands Laeral pay the giff 25,000 gp to lead the defense the city against the tarrasques. Laeral arches an incredulous eyebrow and turns to the characters, asking for their opinion. Score the characters responses based on the following rubric. They start with 0 points:", + "{@creature Laeral Silverhand|WDH} (see appendix A) agrees to meet with the characters and Lieutenant {@creature Dorabeth Rumpington|PlanetTarrasques} in a meeting room at Castle Waterdeep. An escort of twenty {@creature veterans|MM} guards Laeral. After introductions, Dorabeth tells Laeral the same story she shared with the characters then demands Laeral pay the giff 25,000 gp to lead the defense the city against the tarrasques. Laeral arches an incredulous eyebrow and turns to the characters, asking for their opinion. Score the characters responses based on the following rubric. They start with 0 points:", { "type": "list", "items": [