From efccd07f80f6c7d033e2ee60fd1fcb769d50f334 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tanja Roth <taroth@suse.com>
Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2023 17:27:59 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] fixed some issues

- removed spaces between profiling snippets
- added a missing bracket
- rephrased one sentence because I misread it several times
- removed outdated para at the end (using search engines is common
  knowledge meanwhile)
---
 xml/help_admin.xml | 19 ++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xml/help_admin.xml b/xml/help_admin.xml
index 2631c8dcdc..0e0ceed74f 100644
--- a/xml/help_admin.xml
+++ b/xml/help_admin.xml
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@
    <listitem>
     <para>
       Extensive documentation for &productname; is available at <link os="sles"
-      xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/#sles"/> <link os="sles"
-      xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/#sled"/> <link os="osuse"
-      xlink:href="https://doc.opensuse.org"/>. Among others, topics covered range from
+      xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/#sles"/><link os="sled"
+      xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/#sled"/><link os="osuse"
+      xlink:href="https://doc.opensuse.org"/>. Topics covered range from
       deployment, upgrade, and system administration to virtualization, system
-      tuning, and security.
+      tuning, and security, among others.
     </para>
     <para os="sles">
       At <link xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sbp-supported.html"/>
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
    <listitem>
     <para>
      This directory holds release notes for your system (in the subdirectory
-     <filename>release-notes</filename>. It also contains information of
+     <filename>release-notes</filename>). It also contains information of
      installed packages in the subdirectory <filename>packages</filename>. Find
      more detailed information in <xref linkend="sec-help-onboard-docdir"/>.
     </para>
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
     </listitem>
    </varlistentry>
    <varlistentry>
-    <term>&productname; user community</term>
+    <term>User community</term>
     <listitem>
      <para>
       <link os="osuse" xlink:href="https://forums.opensuse.org/">&opensuse;
@@ -487,12 +487,5 @@
     </listitem>
    </varlistentry>
   </variablelist>
-
-  <para>
-   You can also try general-purpose search engines. For example, use the search
-   terms <literal>Linux CD-RW help</literal> or <literal>OpenOffice file
-   conversion problem</literal> if you have trouble with burning CDs or &libo;
-   file conversion.
-  </para>
  </sect1>
 </chapter>