diff --git a/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/barman/single-server-streaming/step02-backup-setup.mdx b/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/barman/single-server-streaming/step02-backup-setup.mdx
index 80d37f7c1f8..61324e0157a 100644
--- a/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/barman/single-server-streaming/step02-backup-setup.mdx
+++ b/advocacy_docs/supported-open-source/barman/single-server-streaming/step02-backup-setup.mdx
@@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ Each line in the `.pgpass` file needs to follow below format:
 ```
 [db_host]:[db_port]:[db_name]:[db_user]:[db_password]
 ```
-Also note that the database name [db_name] for the barman streaming user MUST be `replication`
+The database name [db_name] for the barman streaming user must be `replication`
 
-**Note the change in permissions** - this is necessary to protect the visibility of the file, and PostgreSQL will not use it unless permissions are restricted.
+**Note the change in permissions** - this is necessary to protect the visibility of the file. PostgreSQL won't use it unless permissions are restricted.
 
 !!! Tip Further reading
     For more details on configuration files, see: [the Configuration section in the Barman guide](http://docs.pgbarman.org/release/2.12/#configuration).