From f1b97c07bdf93fda50e0d7bcd01ec037c0e5c78f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Betsy Gitelman <93718720+ebgitelman@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 12 Oct 2023 12:49:43 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Edits to note

---
 ...ming_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/product_docs/docs/epas/15/upgrading/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx b/product_docs/docs/epas/15/upgrading/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx
index 6d9e22f6863..4024708ec23 100644
--- a/product_docs/docs/epas/15/upgrading/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx
+++ b/product_docs/docs/epas/15/upgrading/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@ For more information about using `yum` commands and options, enter `yum --help`
 
 !!! Important
     
-If upgrading to version 15.4,  or later, you should run `edb_sqlpatch`
+If upgrading to version 15.4  or later, run `edb_sqlpatch`.
 
-If the command responds that it has a number of patches needing to be applied like so:
+The command might respond that it has a number of patches needing to be applied, for example:
 
 ```console
 * database edb
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ If the command responds that it has a number of patches needing to be applied li
 58 patches need to be applied to this database.
 ```
 
-Then it will be necessary to execute edb_sqlpatch to patch the system catalog. Run:
+In this case, you need to run edb_sqlpatch to patch the system catalog:
 
 ```shell
 edb_sqlpatch -af
@@ -48,4 +48,4 @@ edb_sqlpatch -af
 
 !!!
 
-For more information about using `edb_sqlpatch` commands and options, please see [edb_sqlpatch](/tools/edb_sqlpatch/) page.
+For more information about using edb_sqlpatch commands and options, see [edb_sqlpatch](/tools/edb_sqlpatch/).